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| APFW 2008-09-10 ch 1, | abuse"His callouses are skin deep, not soul-deep." Nice, you have a way with prose. |
| Asugar 2008-08-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. You say so much about each of them and their relationship in so few words. |
| cowgrl 2008-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, I really do like your writing. Even your smallest peices have a large meaning. |
| rubycaspar 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful |
| tripwatcher2 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was powerful!! |
| navyflightnurse 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery cool ... great comparison between the two, how they will take a life but are afraid to take each other. |
| Camy 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh, so simple and yet so profoundly touching...thank you! |
| Obsessed Pam 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseYour words are just as delicately sensitive as they paint this beautiful picture. Really, really loved it. |
| Gater101 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis has got to be one of my favourite pieces ever written. It' short, poignant and touches something inside of me that makes me take a deep breath and lean bacl a little... I love it. Absolutely love this one. |
| TeylaFan 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! |