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Reviews For: Fragility

APFW
2008-09-10
ch 1,
abuse"His callouses are skin deep, not soul-deep." Nice, you have a way with prose.
Asugar
2008-08-01
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. You say so much about each of them and their relationship in so few words.
cowgrl
2008-05-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, I really do like your writing. Even your smallest peices have a large meaning.
rubycaspar
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely beautiful
tripwatcher2
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was powerful!!
navyflightnurse
2008-04-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery cool ... great comparison between the two, how they will take a life but are afraid to take each other.
Camy
2008-04-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseAh, so simple and yet so profoundly touching...thank you!
Obsessed Pam
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseYour words are just as delicately sensitive as they paint this beautiful picture. Really, really loved it.
Gater101
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseThis has got to be one of my favourite pieces ever written. It' short, poignant and touches something inside of me that makes me take a deep breath and lean bacl a little... I love it. Absolutely love this one.
TeylaFan
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseExcellent!
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