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| foxyassasin 2008-09-25 ch 1,  | abusewow this story is pretty good. i like it you should keep up the good work. the fact that ranma is now a part succubus is pretty cool as well. you should keep on updating because this story is great |
| Servant of K-sama 2008-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseMorrigan and Lilith care more about fighting than sex, beyond that Lilith has the mind and sometimes that body of a child...if your into that fine, but ew! |
| jusenkyo ruler 2008-05-05 ch 2, | abuseloved the description |
| CRose 2008-04-30 ch 2, | abuseIts an interesting take on the idea. I would suggest that you expand it a bit though. Give us a better idea of what Ranko is wearing cause so far we have no clue other than that choker and even that I'm not sure of. Does Ranko have the back and head wings? You haven't said (unless I missed it). With this type of story I would push the Lime elements right to the edge without crossing over the line. Akane in the sling is fine, but what did she look like, how was the vibrator held in, etc. More Detail please. This type of story feeds off the visual element presented. |
| masaki yang yi1 2008-04-29 ch 2, | abuseNow that is a real Ranma/Darkstalkers crossover. The question is can you stay true to the first two chapter's? I know this might be a Ranma/Akane match up,but with Ranma-chan being a Succubus shew just might be able to keep Akane in line. My second question is will Nabiki be included in this as one of Ranko's conquest's? |
| P.H. Wise 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseToo much, too fast, and too OOC. |
| Jerry Unipeg 2008-04-22 ch 2, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Nice start with Akane. |
| iceland 2008-04-22 ch 2, | abuseit is a good story and wonder what will happens next to ranma because of the other demon female. |
| Dragon Man 180 2008-04-22 ch 2, | abuseInteresting story, I can't wait to see the next adventures of Succubus Ranko! |
| firelordeg 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abusewow this is great please update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows |
| Vilkath 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abuseBetter but like other reviewers have said Ranma just seems to have ceased to exist after getting cursed. While the plot is a little weak this could of at least made a decent smut story but then you skip all the lemon and lime scenes as well. They may or may not be allowed at FFnet. Officialy they were against it for while, but all the Yaoi fics can seem to do what ever they want because the moderators either like it, or won't read it. Still I think this story would be greatly improved at another website like or ficwad where you could post a totaly uncensored version. People don't seem to mind plot problems as much in hentai stories. |
| Firehedgehog 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abuseevil laughter |
| Tai Khan 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abuseSlightly better, but only just. Still leaving far too much out, and I _AM_ referring to where this deviates from canon. Ranma Saotome apparently went 'bye-bye' upon becoming cursed at Jusenkyo, and was replaced with an OC (a redheaded succubus that's cursed to take the form of a black-haired pigtailed martial artist, that apparently died at Jusenkyo, when splashed with hot water). This goes beyond Alternate Universe stuff, as all that remains of Ranma appears to be his physical appearance. Essentially...makes a nice 'draft' for a story, but is rapidly losing its appeal as there doesn't appear to be any 'actual' story, just progressive scenes without anything to connect or explain them. |
| Dumbledork 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abuseHehehe. |
| Dumbledork 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseFun to read. Can't wait to see how fastyou will corrupt Ranma. Hehehe. |