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Shanami
2009-11-11 . chapter 2
While this story seems quite dead, I have to give it a nod. There aren't many well done Ranma/Darkstalkers xovers, and this story definitely has potential. Plus, Succubus Ranko just has so much potential to increase that lovely Ranma madness.

I'd be very happy to see this story revived, though I doubt you're planning on touching it again.
chm01
2009-11-04 . chapter 2
any chance of an update?
sin.nighthawk
2009-01-10 . chapter 2
update soon
Sdarian
2008-12-01 . chapter 2
This could turn out to be a pretty good story. The main problems I have with it right now are how rushed it is, having your title/author's notes right in the middle of the chapter for no reason, and then length of the chapters. There are also some issues with leaving incomplete sentences, but I think that would be dealt with when you worked on fleshing out the story more.

Good luck!
foxyassasin
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
wow this story is pretty good. i like it you should keep up the good work. the fact that ranma is now a part succubus is pretty cool as well. you should keep on updating because this story is great
Servant of K-sama
2008-09-16 . chapter 1
Morrigan and Lilith care more about fighting than sex, beyond that Lilith has the mind and sometimes that body of a child...if your into that fine, but ew!
jusenkyo ruler
2008-05-05 . chapter 2
loved the description
CRose
2008-04-30 . chapter 2
Its an interesting take on the idea. I would suggest that you expand it a bit though. Give us a better idea of what Ranko is wearing cause so far we have no clue other than that choker and even that I'm not sure of. Does Ranko have the back and head wings? You haven't said (unless I missed it). With this type of story I would push the Lime elements right to the edge without crossing over the line. Akane in the sling is fine, but what did she look like, how was the vibrator held in, etc.

More Detail please. This type of story feeds off the visual element presented.
masaki yang yi1
2008-04-29 . chapter 2
Now that is a real Ranma/Darkstalkers crossover.

The question is can you stay true to the first two chapter's?

I know this might be a Ranma/Akane match up,but with Ranma-chan being a Succubus shew just might be able to keep Akane in line.

My second question is will Nabiki be included in this as one of Ranko's conquest's?
P.H. Wise
2008-04-24 . chapter 2
Too much, too fast, and too OOC.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-04-22 . chapter 2
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Nice start with Akane.
iceland
2008-04-22 . chapter 2
it is a good story and wonder what will happens next to ranma because of the other demon female.
Dragon Man 180
2008-04-22 . chapter 2
Interesting story, I can't wait to see the next adventures of Succubus Ranko!
firelordeg
2008-04-21 . chapter 2
wow this is great please update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
Vilkath
2008-04-21 . chapter 2
Better but like other reviewers have said Ranma just seems to have ceased to exist after getting cursed. While the plot is a little weak this could of at least made a decent smut story but then you skip all the lemon and lime scenes as well. They may or may not be allowed at FFnet. Officialy they were against it for while, but all the Yaoi fics can seem to do what ever they want because the moderators either like it, or won't read it.

Still I think this story would be greatly improved at another website like or ficwad where you could post a totaly uncensored version. People don't seem to mind plot problems as much in hentai stories.
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