PLEASE write more. I just finished reading and my throat still hurts and my cheeks are wet! I am lacking oxygen beacause I was holding my breaths so much! You are gifted!

The fact that i'm now addicted to this story means no matter how much heartbreak you throw at me I'll keep coming back. At times I even have to walk away from my computer becuase it's to much. You totally rule!

The line I think I will repeat forever: The ground didn't move when I saw her but it crumbled underneath my feet when she was gone.

Seriously there is some HAPPY coming soon right?

Oh Seth, how can you not love Seth. I think everyone should have a Seth in there circle of Friends. I get that Jake does this to himself but seriously bella is a **, just walk away and leave the boy alone...

I cant beleive you have so little reviews on this. i mean really its amazing. Another great chapter and I should be working at the moment but screw it I say they can pay me to read. I love the line: "We're still 0 to 1 there." Ouch!

Is it just me or is Bella one selfish being? What she only now realises that her turning into a vamp could be painful for Jake? Sometimes i just want to beat bella with a stick

So it the Wolfs vs the Volturi? Or the Cullen and Wolfs v the Volturi. Edwards better pull his finger out. Don't let Jake die. I know i ahve like another 5 chapters to read and what ever happens will happen but i just hope it wont be Jake :(

Just like in the book I think those were some of the most killer pages.

Bejebus lady are you trying to kill me here with all this hurt? Please tell me there is going to be some sort of a happy ending

The funny thing is when i first read the books i was the biggest Edward fan but after reading FF and rereading the series I can't help but wish things ended differently for Jacob and i'm not just talking about the ** up nessie situation because that was just stupid and seriously Stephanie couldn't have come up with anything, ANYTHING better then that?

I get that he promised her but seriously one person can only put themselves through so much...

I truely wish the books did not lead to Jacob being broken. It's so sad. Your style of writting is amazing, it truely makes you feel, the happiness, the hurt, the heart ache.

I really hope you will finish this story sometime!
I love bella and the pack hanging out, even if it is a bit bittersweet and I'd really like to know where you take this.. so i hope someday in the future you'll return to this story!

I love the story and this chapter actually made me cry...

I like your stories, all the sadness in it are very atractive to me (I know, I'm twisted)

Such a beautiful story! Have you chosen to end it there or will there be more? I hope there's more, but then again you've left it at a point where the reader can dream their own outcome. I read it as discovering the Jacob has imprinted on Bella without realizing it since he'd discovered she was his soul mate before he ever began to phase. I'd love to find out whether that is the case and whether that will render the Volturi as a non-threat to the pack. Please update (or let me whether that is the case.

Thanks!