 xXFissshBonesssXx 2008-07-25 . chapter 1Oh.
Very nice.
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 midday.dreams 2008-07-11 . chapter 1Love it. :) Short and sweet, but descriptive.
I didn't ever think of Kisame smoking. I guess it's plausible now, though. ♥
I loved the last line. |
 jo 2008-06-18 . chapter 1 Nice I liked it. |
 karierte 2008-05-28 . chapter 1I just can't leave you alone, dammit!
Wonderful. I knew you could have done a little better, but maybe that was because I haven't really seen you do angst much.
I like the way that the wind blew 'dejectedly', and the way his fingers 'gently stroke the face of the gravestone'. You capture Sasuke well, though on this occasion I was pleased to see that you made the tone of this fiction softer, almost.
Though I can't see Itachi eating cake, we all got the message.
Love to you, as always... |
 Kaira-chan15 2008-05-21 . chapter 1Very, how should I say it, depressing and grim, but that's a good thing! It was amazingly well written and I really liked it. I especially liked what was written on his tombstone; nice way to end it! Good work! :D |
 NeverEverStar 2008-05-15 . chapter 1Well that got me in tears! I'm sitting here crying like a blubering fool now. Don't get me wrong I absolutly loved your fic! Like seriously, I'm so happy you wrote a fix dedicated to Itachi, especially with what the latest chapters have been like. Yay! |
 Chromde 2008-05-15 . chapter 1That was so sad. Like, no lie. I think I'm tearing up. DAMMIT, I could picture it so well. Amazing job. |
 Rebellia 2008-04-27 . chapter 1 This fic was very thought-provoking and quite befitting of a eulogy for the ever-so-twisted Uchiha Itach. I liked all parts of it, from the dry humor of Kisame to the rueful half-nostalgia of Sasuke (which was less OOC and more the resurfacing of long-buried, feeble emotions.)The line about how Itachi wanted to "go down" was probably the best...totally fitting of both Uchihas--Sasuke to think it and Itachi to want it. The inscription on the gravestone was a really nice touch too ^^. |
 Quillslinger 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Very pretty and grim. I haven't even considered the possibility of Kisame after Itachi. |
 Nayeli 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Aww, i really liked Itachi a lot and I'm really sad he died too and now i don't know if you know wouldn't want to spoil it so i won't tell you it make want to slap sasu for killing him, but anyways i guess that just didn't make sense I really liked it this, good work!:) |
 Belladonna-Isabella 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Very good! |
 CutieHinata12 2008-04-20 . chapter 1that was very good i liked it very much |