Man, this is good.Are you still going to update it though?I hope you still would.

I really hope you update this soon. I find your take on L's childhood fascinating and I'm eager to see where you take this. Thank you for writing such an enjoyable story.

... *coughs at the lateness of this review* I realized I never came back to read the last section, soo...

*waits for the appropriate 'NEE I'M STUCK AGAIN' comment to come for chapter 4*

That story was awesome, and I thought that L was absolutely adorable. I can imagine it very clearly L as a little curious child, frustrating his caretakers, and solving hard puzzles.

The last two sentences made think: "aww.. how cute". I think that this story has potential to become a very good short fic. If I may suggest, I think that the story should end with L solving the case with his mother's murder. But of course, that is entirely up to you.

Thank you for writing this piece.
SakuraCa

~The butcher, the baker, and the candlestick maker~...^__^ Sorry, I'm just really happy I remembered that line, 'specially since I forget the rest of it. lol

Great chapter, favorite was when L saw Dora and just walked on past her. 'S just the kinda foreshadowing we all know and love - leave it all behind for something bigger, that's L.

LOL @ the chapter title, XD.

Love the fic, ShaCha, and congrats on finishing this chapter at last! *fanfare* That's one plunny satisfied.

~ Compy

Very nice. Extremely well written, though I don't believe that L was THAT malicious towards others as a child.

This... This is the best fanfiction of death note I have ever read. Its ingenious work! I would kill if I could write like you.
Its just so fantastic and touching and loving and intelligent.
Words cannot describe how I am feeling.
Please keep updating this story for me. I am truly swayed by your ability in literature.

Haha. And I love the use of french in your story. I am half french. I know the language.

I'm really starting to get into this! I'm obsessed with how you've portrayed your characters, and how you manage to keep a decent length and a steady, attention-holding pace. Usually when I read chapters of your length, I get bored or distracted!
This is fantastic work! PLEASE write more!
*AK*

I developed an immediate liking to this story! Is it because L is in it, or your writing style is really good? I'd have to say it was both! XD
L really can be a little beast, huh?
*AK*

-clings- Kelpy loves you ShaCha.
And your work too of course. x3 Moar now plz.

wow. i can't wait for the next chapter.

I just found your story. I really like it. I've been looking for story enumerating L growing up and I have yet to find a good one but yours is very well written and quite plausible.

I hope you continue this story and that you update soon.

Finally! An adult who doesn't patronise L. Hooray for Quillsh Wammy.

Good job. I love how you tied in L's vision (memory?) from ep. 25.

Nice. I like this story. Perhaps I won't give up on the whole Deathnote fanfiction category. It's very interesting so far. How long is it going to be?
~Sasha