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| myshadowspirit 2008-07-07 ch 6,  | abuseSo . . .basically . . .she just wants to be friends? And they're just going to stay friends? I'd think she'd wonder, if not only a little, if she liked him back |
| myshadowspirit 2008-07-07 ch 5, | abuse"Than one with the, uh . . ." . . .“hair, and the . . . you know, face.” hahha best chapter I just had a mental image of Ned and Patick in dodge ball screaming their heads off. It made me laugh Somethimes I get Sally, Sherry and sara all mixed up though and I get confused. Especially Sally and Sherry since they both end in y and start with s I actually liked this chapter better than you other ones |
| myshadowspirit 2008-07-07 ch 4, | abusehahahhaaha Hormones Cassandra seemed nice at first . . . Oh well. |
| myshadowspirit 2008-07-07 ch 3, | abuseI'm glad you made Sally go to the dark side for a while. It makes her more human. the best characters are the ones with flaws. I didn't think it was choppy, but I, myself tend to be choppy . . .apparently, so I don't know |
| myshadowspirit 2008-07-07 ch 2, | abusewhostory . . .hahahahah! Did you make that up? That's adorable! Oh the fluffiness . . . |
| myshadowspirit 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI liked the part were he randomly asks if he could hold her hand. That was cute. Don't reallt remmember what who's look like. You think I should look them up? Ha! I remembered to read this. I didn't foget . . hahahah. (^^) I'm normal |
| Jinney Skellington 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseMy GOD! THIS IS AMAZING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| Zeakari 2008-06-15 ch 6, | abuseXD You really didn't do that Tom and Sherry thing on purpose? I had thought you did. Now I must giggle in amusement. Just so you know, this chapter IS very good. It seems like we're the same with our opinions on our stories, eh? Anyway, poor Ned. It takes a lot to get a physical reaction from me, but my stomach did a flip when Sally popped up behind him after she found out everything. :') I wanna hug him so hard, he's such a sweetheart in your story! (by the way, your profile makes me want to watch The Office XD) |
| spartan08 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseaw poor ned! Im glad Sally doesnt like tom any more..stupid a-hole! That made mw really sad though! I want Sally and Ned to be together! but i do like how her feelings for ned haven't turn to love love just yet. makes the stories more interesting X3 and your chapters to not suck at all! They are awesome! |
| -Hope- In the Name of Love 2008-06-09 ch 6, | abuseI /loved/ this one. It does /not/ suck. Thanks for the update! --Hope |
| NightmareBeforeChristmasFre... 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseAW! Super cute chapter! NED LIKES SALLY! Gosh... I really am immature! Eh, oh well. Um and what?! This chapter did totally not suck! It was pretty amazing... yeah... PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| ChibiKumiko 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseOH MY GOSH!! THIS CHAPTER WAS ADORABLE! XD amazing casey! absoloutley amazing... |
| NikChik-11 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseIt doesn't SUCK! I LOVE THIS STORY! Update soon! |
| TinkerbelleTB 2008-06-07 ch 6, | abuseOkay, first off, STOP BEATING YOURSELF UP OVER A GREAT CHAPTER. There were many aspects of highschool that made this believeable, you kep the characters awesomely accurate, Ned especially with being Ned, and it was just plain sweet. So UIT SAYING IT'S NOT. XD It's a wonderful chapter. :3 I'm really looking foeward to the next one. ^^ |
| ChibiKumiko 2008-05-27 ch 5, | abuseaww poor ned! Sherry's mean too! grr... Sherry: ah scary! *runs away* sorry for controlling your characters in the comments so much XD i can't wait till the next chap! |