(This review counts for all 11 chapters because I'm too lazy to do all of them. xD)

Aww! This is so adorable! I have a new respect and adoration for Ned and Sally! <3 I don't know whether I feel sorry for Jamie or not. I have a feeling she's not given up on Ned just yet.

Update soon, please! This story is soo addicting!

Awesome! I love your writing style.
The hair and the face thing made me laugh! :D

Yeay! I really liked this chapter. I really appreciate how much Jamie has matured and i fell a bit sorry for her. But Ned's not right for her; Sally and Him are made for eachother. Jamie'll find someone. Haha im talking about them like they're real. (then again, maybe they are. If Whoville is on a speck of dust, its not like we can prove its real or not.) lol just ignore my rambling. UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON!

I love Sarah. Great Chapter! hm, i wonder why i always capitalize the word Chapter? is there something wrong with me? ah well . . .lol sorry/.

*groans* now you're starting to sound like my english teahcer, talking about themes!! *bangs head against wall* ahh well, you are right. Nice Chapter, keep it up!

Sally seems fine! Not too OOC un my opinion, . . .i mean, anyone would be confused.

You are WRONG!! it was a GREAT chapter! poor Ned, aarrgh . . .

Teeheehee! Patrick IS funny! this should be interesting. . .

Cute! Haha nice story so far. And everyone is nicely in character. And by everyone i meanNed and Sally. Lol.

I've also written scenes that were supposed to just start the chapter, but ended up taking over the whole chapter. Nothing wrong with that. Sometimes things take longer to work out than you expect.

I like the scene where Ned is talking to Jamie and smacked the phone into himself. It's hard to write slapstick for something that will never be onscreen, but you pulled it off. And he wouldn't be Ned if he wasn't clumsy every now and then.

I couldn't help sympathizing with Jamie. She's a nice girl, even if she can be annoying sometimes. But, you know, she and Ned just weren't meant to be.

Interesting chapter. I'm sorry if those sound like empty words but it IS 3:24 AM where I'm at and my brain is tired. But your story is still good, so there. lol

I liked this chapter! It made me like Jamie a litle more and understand her feelings.
Oh by the way, how did Jamie know he was gonna break up with her? Or did she just expect it? I might've missed it because I'm kinda tired right now and it's been a while since I read the other chapters.

*snorts* BAH HA HA HA!
Dude, I'm sorry, but I simply cannot picture that ugly, green councilman with the funny voice and the weird smile *hee hee* being the most popular guy in school...
and BUFF, too?!
AH HA HA HA HA!!
Oh, man *haha* this just made my day, right there *hee hee*

^_^

This chapter is pretty much how my sixth grade year went.
Everyone had suddenly picked up cussing,
I wanted nothing more than to be popular,
and I started to think my old friends we losers...
but at the end of the year, I realized how stupid that was
and went back to being my crazy, lovable self ^_^
so, yeah, this chapter was like a blast from my past, ya know?
haha, very nice job, I liked it :)