Aw, that was way better. I really like this.

Ooh, it's fine. :)

WAY better than the ending we were given.

i much prefer this version too! that episode makes me cringe so much and the ending when buffy shuts the door in his face... he looks so crushed! i guess thats another reason why they called the episode "crush"... anyway, i loved this... hope to see more from you soon! =)

WOW! that was really great, are you writting more or are you leaving it there? if you are writting more i look forward to reading it.

aww! i love it!!

Aw, that's so sweet. I totally loved it and I acn''t wait for the next Star-Crossed chapter, but I'm hanging in there. Take your time.

~KimaraSims~

Great chapter.
I loved how it played out and how spike got his cumb :P
BYe

I found it a nice break. And if it gets those writer's wheels turning again, I'm all for it.

well I like it is a start

great story!