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| FFR 2008-09-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseM. I want cake! Huhu. I'll stop here for now, I'll catch it up later. Ja! |
| FFR 2008-09-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseHuhu! I love how your dialogue comes to life! |
| FFR 2008-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi. I was just dropping by and this seems interesting. |
| Reader 2008-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou could sure use a better description. But chapter 1 is fine so far. |
| Panda Poo 2008-08-28 ch 16, anon. | abuseThe ending wasn't exactly what I was expecting, in a good way! |
| kuro.chi.ame. 2008-08-28 ch 16,  | abuseI'm glad you're feeling better :D Lol when I was reading the last part I was like, OMG HIBARI? But then I read that he ran and was being nice so, yeah. Started thinking it wasn't hibari. Read Authors little ramblings and went like OMG SO IT REALLY WAS HIBARI?! A little ooc but, I think at the moment seeing a girl that goes to the same school as you not wearing any pants makes you a little ooc. >.> Good chapter~ Still waiting to go "OMGOMGOGMOMG *starts hyperventilating* when I find out why she's so important. xI |
| Green Apple 2008-08-27 ch 16, anon. | abuseThanks for updating! Urg, I wanna know what happens when they find her so bad. XP |
| 22894 2008-08-26 ch 16, anon. | abuseI want to know the background story... badly. |
| XxxxAnime-OtakuxxX 2008-08-26 ch 16, | abuseWOW YAY THANK YOU FOR UPDATING cant wait for the next chapter! |
| mbshadow 2008-08-25 ch 1, | abusewell so far it looks good also just to check this not a 27 Yaoi fic right? |
| hikari no sora 2008-08-09 ch 15, | abuseWow! This is an awesome story! What a great OC! Mine always turn out Mary Sues. Yeah...well this is really awesome. I'm wondering what'll happen next! Please Update! |
| hikari no sora 2008-08-09 ch 6, | abuseUm, its not too mary sue! If you want to make it un-mary sue-ish, why don't you make her bipolar or something, or she can be too cool and it gets on people's nerves or something like that? If it was bad I would've stopped reading, I kinda like this story. |
| theGrimmBunny 2008-07-31 ch 15, | abuseI love this story, and great chapter |
| Green Apple 2008-07-28 ch 15, anon. | abuseUh oh, what if she gets carried off by hobos? Thanks for updating by the way. :D |
| kuro.chi.ame. 2008-07-28 ch 15, | abuseOMG NO DON'T SLEEP OUTSIDE IT'S DANGEROUS!! There are perverts anywhere you go -.- like, DR. SHAMAL what if he finds an unconsious girl just lying there so defenseless?! T>T Ok, now that I'm done with that great chapter update soon, loved how you did the hospital scene with the guy who was guarding Lia. o.O |