Reviews for Cherub: THE NEW KIDS

fanficlover812 2008-07-30 ch 6,	abusekeep going!
Star 2008-07-14 ch 6, anon.	abuseThis is rubbish
EternalFlame105 2008-04-21 ch 5,	abuseWell first thing's first, I think that instead of using 'Ur' you should use the proper spelling for the word, instead of net speak. I saw a couple of minor typos, so perhaps getting a beta to check you're writing for you will help :D It is usually hard to pick up on your own mistakes, but when someone else checks it over, the mistakes are a lot more obvious. Also puntuation, I'm not going to be too picky with this, but using commas will help sometimes, short sentences aren't always that easy to read because they tend to disrupt the flow of the story (in my opinion anyway) But, on a lighter note, it's a good fic, though sorta following in the footsteps of The Recruit, but I guess that's what you're aiming for. I haven't read much CHERUB fics in this fandom, but I hope this goes well for you ^^ -destinystar105
smellmoney 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abusei like it