so so sweet!

i absoultely love this short story!

hey! i loved your story! it was really well written, and deep. you have a seriously awesome talent. hope your other fics are as good!

Wow this piece is amazingly literary. It does invoke different emotions through imagery, wordplay, and tone. Oh and, i love the fact the you write in present tense. It's not easy, and the best of us often slip back into past tense but nonetheless, Great piece; i never see such quality pieces anymore

This is really fantastic! Superb!

Love it love it love it!
Brilliant story :)
Would love to see that last chapter in James' point of view!
x

Ohmygod, this is beautiful. I am sitting in my chair and crying onto my laptop and so much more content for having read your story. Please be proud of what you've written, because I loved it :]

Aw, that was so sweet <3

That was brilliantly poetic! Lily's regret for pushing James off all those years really shines through. Amazing job!

Wow. This was beautiful, even poetic, I'd say. With all the repetitions and that - I'm blown away. It was beautiful, and yet so right. Especially the last chapter, but it all floated together so much I shouldn't even be saying that. You're a really talented writer to create this much feeling without any dialouge, just with the descriptive language. I'm impressed.

Im crying and shaking as I write this, you are one of the most amazing authors I have ever seen, and that was amazing. I have to say that I've read thousands and thousands of fanfictions, but I've never cried uptil now. This story was just so good, and I think that you should write profesionaly. I just want to say that this is the most beautiful story that I have evr read an just WOW!

Oh my god. :|
This is amazing. I have tears in my eyes as I'm writing this. I absolutely love it. You write beautifully and it seemed like I could feel every emotion Lily was feeling.
I am totally in love with this story. You are a brilliant writer.
I am in awe D:

These three chapters were the most beautiful things I have ever read. Seriously. This was so good! I loved it. So much.

Wow, it was brilliantly written. Great job!

Angelica

This is very good! You are a very talented writer!

that was beautiful. great job!