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-delicate.desires
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Cute fic!
PeaceLover-SpreadIt895
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
i loved that! you should continue writing it really is your thing!
Kitten Kisses
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
I'm...a sneaky bastard, aren't I? ...Well, yeah, of course.

[As always, please don't alert/favorite/C2 without a review. You like it? Explain. :)] Er...be careful saying that. Of course this was almost a year ago, but I do believe that over on LJ I was called a self-entitled bitch for saying that. But that was a couple of years ago at least.

Anyway, this one was interesting. Tamaki's excuse was kind of lame, though. If he can't be with her every single second, he doesn't want to be with her at all? What is that supposed to mean? Or does he mean she's distracting him completely from his job and they'll be penniless on the streets because he'll be too busy staring at her to go to work?

Wow, I'm epically confused.

But no matter. I don't like Kyouya, and I don't like Kyouya/Haruhi, but I read this anyway because heck, I clicked on it, curious as I was, and ...uh, I was curious.

You don't seem to like poor Tamaki much. [Comforts him.]

I like how you wrote Kyouya in this, though. He's very in character, I think. The way he just...holds her without saying anything, and then afterward, he still doesn't say much.

Cheers,
-Manna
Miggs
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
Well written and very intriguing, especially the last line. Oh, and I do love this bit here-"The thing that frustrated Haruhi most at that moment was not that he had taken her away from a lucrative career and her family and friends, nor that he had promised her the world and refused to make the delivery; it was that the French phrasebook he had presented her with did not have the phrase she wanted in it. “Where is the train station?” was there. “Where is the bathroom?” also made an appearance. “Could you direct me to the nearest tall building so that I can throw myself off?” was not to be found."- Reading that made me feel good that Kyouya and Haruhi are in good fanficcer hands.
ForgottenTales
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
o.O I loved this!! Especially the last part where she went to Kyoya's. XD
Zeyro
2008-09-12 . chapter 1
Personally...I like the couple and it's well written..
AmbivalentAngyl
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
Wow demanding i felt bad since you did demand a review with my fave. I like the idea a lot because it's true in a lot of ways Tamaki would love her entirely too much to have a life. Kyoya who practically compartmentalizes would have no problem separating his love life from his work life but not to the point where she would be uninvolved. You are the lucky receiver of the longest review i have ever written.
xoxoxlovestinksxoxox
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Ah-HA! I giggled a little when I saw "Narita International Airport," but then I spotted "Tachibana," and I think I'm correct in saying that I've spotted another Hot Gimmick fan! XD

Anyway, it was sweet. And VERY probable. Pretty in character. Poor, over-dramatic Tamaki. He doesn't seem to realize how much he lost out on that one. I can imagine him freaking out and tracking her down, only to find her deeply in love with his old best friend.

And as for the tall building to throw herself off, I'd recommend the Eiffel Tower. May not be easy getting over the edge, but she'd definitely get into the international news, right?
azurefirewulf
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
I likie^^, it's been a long time since I've seen a kyoharu and I miss it dearly. X3 luv it.
sweeneysgirl120
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg, you have to post a new chapter up, if you dont i will cry.. i would write more but the power might go out, so i have to go, if you put another chapter up then i will write more... please please please!
smlotrfan
2008-06-17 . chapter 1
write a sequel please

it was a very great story :)
Penneay7
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
this stiory was awsome thx fo writtin it
Calindy
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
Nice. :)
someonecool93
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
It was actually rather... odd. I somehow couldn't really understand the story. The ending was pretty nice though.
ColourfulKyouya-SenpaiMaybeNot
2008-05-02 . chapter 1
Aw, I love the last part!
It was so cute(and listening to Sweet & Sour by S.H.E. & Fahrenheit is helping it make it cuter)!

Please keep up the awesome work! ^^
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