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| Fangirlofrandomness 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseIt's a good idea for a beginning of a fic...you should continue it!! Your writing is good - but try combining a few more sentences, and put in more adjectives - it adds a little flavor!! You should write more, and longer! |
| ChocolateIsMyDrug 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI like it - it's good for a first fanfic and I'm interested to see where you will go with this. I'm so confused about this blue-eyed Shanti - we'll find out more, right? Update soon! Side note: I noticed that you have anonymous reviews disabled - this means that people who don't have accounts or are too lazy to log in won't be able to review. If you go to the Reviews section when you log in, you can change this setting to allow anonymous reviews. |