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CYMKK09
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
I am crying now!It's so sad and yes...Snape should not be forgotten!
Dara-si
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
very nice
StarTrekFan83
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
I have to say that I nearly cried at this one. It was so sad and so well written. Great job. :)
Bluishorbs
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
lovely :)
Melissa Jooty
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
This was a beautiful, bittersweet piece. I love your depiction of a man who had sacrificed so much and only received recognition in death. McGonagall's grief and guilt were perfectly portrayed as was Luna's awareness and maturity (for all her airy ways, she was always more accepting of the world than any of her classmates). I wish there had been scenes as haunting as these in DH.
Sinkme
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
every time i read this i think i've already reviewed but i just checked, and i haven't left one yet and im long overdue.
great one shot. this completely captured everything i wanted to happen to snape after he died. it was so well written that every time i read it i tear up. awesome job!
Kelly Chambliss
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
Very nicely done -- effectively understated and in-character for both McGonagall and Luna. I like that Minerva cleans his body without magic and that they put him in a private space. My only nitpick concerns that last line: I don't see Minerva calling Severus "child," not after all she knows of him; it seems almost like a diminishment. But this is a minor point; the whole story is a fine farewell to my second-favorite HP character (after McGonagall).
FanOfEverything100
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
*SOB* This was so sad! Although I liked the connection between Luna and Snape. It was really touching.
Keep it up!
FanOfEverything100
ForeverinMoonlight
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
So beautiful. This is an amazing tribute to Snape, and like a lot of people who have reviewed this before me I'd like to thank you for writing this. Great job.
Pirates Sparrow and Turner
2008-11-11 . chapter 1
Your talent with words has painted a poignantly beautiful and touching tribute to the great Severus Snape in this remarkable piece. Thank you for writing such a tale for him.
Also, I never would have thought about Minerva's connection to Severus, but you've created a lovely and lasting relationship there that I hope to see more of in the future. Just because he's dead in the books and movies doesn't mean Snape can not live on forever in the stories his fans choose to pen for him, and so, though I usually detest this line in the reviews for my own short stories, I feel a need to close with these three words: Please write more.
Thank you.
hypotemoose
2008-10-29 . chapter 1
this stoy is so beautiful, it made me cry. thankyou very much for posting it.
LovesRickman
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
An EXCELLENT job! Had tears in my eyes from it, a sign of a truly awesome fic! Congrats on a job very very well done! I don't think I will EVER forgive JKR for killing Severus,particularly in the way she did!

Missy aka LovesRickman
Silverthreads
2008-09-23 . chapter 1
Very beautifully done.
Audrey33
2008-09-23 . chapter 1
That...was...GREAT! Amazing! whatever! Kep up the good work, I wouldn't mind seeing a short FF on something else with Snape and Minerva. Great job!
Alcina vom Steinsberg
2008-09-23 . chapter 1
Very touching, very sad, and truly a lovely small piece of a very special relationship. Thank you!
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