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| smiley smiles 202 2008-09-05 ch 2,  | abuselike it so far, keep writing ill keep reviewing!! |
| onioN44 2008-07-18 ch 2, | abusedudeurfugly, This is my first Max/OC (my sister was telling me that EVERYONE does them and nobody reads them so they give up on it) but that's not important. This is kinda... well new! I mean Max is kinda, sorta, really OOC and it's really bugging me but hopefully it'll change, right? **These are just suggestions, it's your story, do what you want** Yeah Max is just kinda out there and then he meets a girl and I KNOW that theyre gonna meet up at Sadie's gig and i KNOW that theyre gonna fall in love or something like that. It's just kinda predictable. I'll read on but stop if things dont pick up (like the way I feel they should). onioN44 |
| Asthetic 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuse...I must say I am very, very fond of this story. It's a fun thing to read this story, not only because it's fantastic, but also, because my name is Anna. =3 This story is great, man. It's fantasitc. |
| Little-Lady15 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseanother great chapter! Can't wait for Anna and Max to start interacting more. |
| K.D. Sparrow 2008-06-14 ch 2, | abuseI like this story a lot! You are very good at writing, update soon! |
| K.D. Sparrow 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseexcellent start! Update soon! |
| lXx.-Dream.Catcher-.xXl 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Nice job! keep up the good work continue soon |
| angel718 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseAh...It made me smile. “Sorry…it’s just--” he stumbled over his words, “I’m Max.” E...so cute. I heart your Max, and Anna seems really spunky. Do update soon. |
| A Fiendish Thingy 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuse“Sorry…it’s just--” he stumbled over his words, “I’m Max.” Something about that line made me feel all happy inside. As well as this was written, I'm wondering if it's really in character for Max to fall in love at first sight, but even though it's a tad out of character, you're working with it well, with the way he seems to be denying his feelings. I'd like to see more of this. |
| AllYouNeedIsLove3 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseoh this sounds awsome! some more awsome writing, i cant wait to see this stroy develops, it sounds like it should be a good one! |
| Princess Sianna 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERY NICE! peace and Love Man RIGHT ON! P.S. ~Hippie Lover~ |
| Little-Lady15 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI don't normally like Max/OC stories but yours is very promising. Can't wait to see where this leads. Your stories rock! |