|Reviews for Simply Begin|
| ABundleOfDaydreams 3/31/13 . chapter 14
| Princess Maki 3/14/13 . chapter 5
I like it so far
| penguins-ate-me 6/5/08 . chapter 14
once again, aww! how sweet!
Genma's little speech here was amazing and so touching to the point that I felt he was saying that to me (like that would ever happen)
very cute pairing, even though I hardly hear of it :3
| giganemo 5/28/08 . chapter 14
It's a good story. I really like the ending. It's very beautiful.
| Anise 5/21/08 . chapter 14
It was nice to get to see how all this started although I feel so sad for Raidou knowing the situation he was in, too bad they couldn't have just fallen into a happy little threesome ;) (wouldn't that have been hot!)
Even though we know that Genma and Iruka don't end up staying together forever I can't help but feel that they really are soulmates, I've always believed you can have more than one. They truly do seem to want and need each other around and regardless of who they end up in a relationship with they will always be a part of each others life, it's such a complicated but wonderful friendship. Another fabulous story and I'm off to start the next in the series! _
| keiichisei 5/11/08 . chapter 14
*wibbles* Iruka gave Raidou a picture of Genma sleeping, didn't he? This epilogue was so cute I wanted to say "aww" but my roommate would be like o_o;; I'm sad it's over, but I know you will keep writing, so I will live. Great story. Will you continue with this Iruka somehow? I rather like him .
| keiichisei 5/11/08 . chapter 13
This chapter is a little bit sad. I can understand a bit why Iruka would not want to become Jounin. That position entails a lot more killing than I think our 'Ruka can handle, or would want to handle at least. I am interested to see how you introduce becoming a teacher _.
| cdkobasiuk 5/11/08 . chapter 14
A great ending.
| keiichisei 5/10/08 . chapter 12
This chapter makes me smile. I am glad that Genma was so concerned about Iruka's wellbeing. It would be hard for me, if I were Iruka, to think about the fact that my lover has been with so many other people, but treasuring the present moment is good too. I'm liking this story.
| aoh 5/9/08 . chapter 12
"more turned on by touching Iruka than by any touch he’d ever felt himself"
i guess tells us a bit about his past relationships. anyway. m. it's such a hot thought.
| aoh 5/9/08 . chapter 12
i like that moment of doubt in genma. but "Relationships shouldn’t give you headaches” - hmm, i think you're wrong about that, gen-chan :P there should be a good ratio to the headache and joy a relationship causes, like, much more joy please, but don't give up too easily!
well, i guess it's a bit pointless to write that since i know in the end it won't work out BUT for now i want it to. AND in the same way that their friendship can be the foundation for their romantic relationship, this in turn will become the foundation for a new friendship _ (a not etirely platonic friendship, i hope... *doesn't want lecanis to burn out because of too many plot bunnies, but still hopes for a post-gossip-game iruka/genma story*)
i LOVE the way iruka talks to genma the "fuck me" and the sweet stuff
*blushes hard and enjoys the action*
it was too short, of course :P hot first times are alway too short, sigh
| aoh 5/8/08 . chapter 11
no fair fights between shinobi, no no *shakes head and grins*
punishing genma by bringing in tetsu and zumo as well would actually have been a great plan from the beginning, i think, i just start giggling every time he calls them names and this conflict comes up XD
"you know as well as I do that he’s been after you for a while” hmm raidou is claiming such things again *wonders*
iruka patting genma on the head! haha, i wonder how he feels, genma i mean
reading this, and the last chapter, i actually find myself liking the idea of irukaxraidou a bit. just a little bit, but it's there ;)
now i wonder if raidou, after some time to get accustomed to the thought, actually did like the kinkyness of the pictures. or was he just teasing, suggesting to put them up on the wall? thanks for putting that in, btw! though i did think of putting it somewhere where others would see it, just above the bed... and that reminds me, didn't iruka put the album on the bookshelf...? risky
| Rhiannon125 5/6/08 . chapter 11
I love it. Really. So... yum. Loving it. Is Raidou jealous?
| keiichisei 5/6/08 . chapter 11
Yes Genma, even though Iruka is the one after you, it doesn't make it alright to treat him that way, xD. Raidou, what a good guy . Can't wait for the next chapter
| aoh 5/5/08 . chapter 10
*made a picture* _