How wonderful! I really enjoyed reading Relativity a while back, but just like the Roswell, the implied S/J stuff tends to be more frustrating than satisfying, so thanks for filling in the gaps. I've tried to read a lot of the end of the world fics with not much success, but this one was brilliant. Thank you, Its always a pleasure to read your work, you really have a gift.

I really don't know what to put down first! It's one of the best stories I've ever read. I just finished reading the novel and posted the shippy bits on the SJ thread but I never expected to read this when someone pointed your fic out to me.

Your chapters should be in that book. I want to give you the highest credit I can give. You should just write a novel and forward it to Sally and see if it can be published.

I loved how you used the parts from the book and mixed them in with your writing. I loved how Jack cooked dinner when they were in that situation. I can tell you that it's spot on. When I heard I lost my partner at a very young age, that night I stared into the living room fire for hours and hours until I got up and started planting flowers in the guarden outside; finding sanity in normality. It just touches the heart.

Except for that scene that will be stuck in my mind for the rest of my shippy life, I loved how you described their first kiss. Jack searching her eyes and asking her.

The scene where Jack meets Sam again and finds out that she's pregnant.

And of course her death and the ending. Wow! You definitely tugged on my heart and soul.

Gosh, I can't stop reviewing this Fic!

You did an amazing job, I love your works and am looking forward to read more. I was so into your story I ignored two phone calls...I mean...

Thank you APA for this wonderful piece of art!

huggles

Lara
PS: Miss you at the SJ thread!

I don't know how I missed it before but this is one of the best stories I've ever read, simply fantastic, thank you.

This story is incredible. There is no other word for it. I, too, was quite taken with "Relativity"... this reads like a companion novel (except that it's even better).

I love everything about it. The inventive plot, then sly callbacks to the show, the clever, true-to-character dialogue, the completely believable reactions of both humanity and our beloved SG-1 (though I got pretty cross with Agent Barrett). Not to mention the way the novel is incorporated so thoroughly into the mythos, and the way the "Relativity" character of Jade is so well fleshed out and... finished, somehow.

And such wonderful writing! Elegant prose, not forced, not trying too hard, never cringe-worthy or lacking. Beautifully-turned phrases and truly heart-breaking poignancy.

Seriously. Just... incredible. There is no other word for it.

(Minor note: a little copy-editing wouldn't have gone astray. But, then, the Fandemonium novels often seem to lack that, too.)

I know this was posted months ago but having read it I found myself needing to leave feedback. This is a fabulous story. I have also read Relativity and consider it on of the best Stargate novels and your story just adds to it. I'm also going to look at your other stories.

Wow, this is a really great story. Your writing technique is awesome. The plot is amazing. Combined together I just couldn't stop reading. Thanks a lot for writing this.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read.

Relativity had been on my shelf for quite some time, but I had never picked it up until I came across your story based off of it. I read your author's note, and instead of proceeding with your story, I picked up Relativity. It was one of the best SG-1 books I had ever read.

When I came back to your story, I felt like I understood so much more. I could see your story fitting right in to Relativity. If I didn't know any better, I'd think you were James Swallow. ;-)

I knew going in it wasn't going to be a happily ever after story, but for me, in a way it was. It was an ATL story, but it was still the best ever SG-1 story I had read, and I don't say that lightly.

Well done!

Honestly, as beautiful as some of the Sam and Jack moments in here, I think my favorite is the first scene with Sam and Daniel. Its just so right. Thanks :)

Just had to comment here - I'm loving your Sam's POV bits. I've struggled with her perspective during this period myself, and I think you hit it just spot on. Excellent! - Jen

Great story showing what lead to the events in Relativity, and the end result. Very emotional.
I liked seeing the familiar ship names (including Phoenix) and the familiar names on the strike team (even Laura Cadman! and Lorne the painter: lol)
Good job,
ED

just noticed this one.
I rather liked Relativity, so I'm definitely reading this.

Yes. Well. Finally, eh? Just have to say, as I always think when I start one of your stories. You're writing *style* is phenomenol. Definitely professional quality. Just had to say that... cause I'm not sure when I'll get around to reading more, and wanted you to know :)

Hey! This was a wonderful story that was very masterfully written. Want to know my favourite part? Right at the beginning, the way your prologue was so intense, and then it moved into the "it was war" part about the jello! excellent pacing.

Just had to tell you - i had to re-read 'Out of Time' because I just finished "Relativity." I can totally see where it itched you. I'm so thankful you wrote this - even if I got them out of order.
BTW I think Mr. Swallow should send you a % of the royalties he'll get as people like me read his book after reading your story! ;-)

This was a really great story. I'm so glad I read it. I enjoyed the Relitivity very much and I wish more people would write tags, epilogues, etc...for the books.