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| EmpyrealFantasy 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseOh gods, I've not read RE fics in forever!! But, well, this involved Wesker. Therefore I had to read. XD Nice job. There are a lot of typos, but the content is well done and I like the change. :) The only problem I saw was that this really didn't give us much of a glimpse into how the change effected anything. We see the lack of betrayal, and we can imagine.. but for the concept of the fic, I would have really liked to see a few glimpses into how different the future was for this. Anyway, good job. I love Wesker much, and it was very much worth the read. |
| WendWriter 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseHey Shadow, nice job! I particularly liked the last line. Good luck in the challenge. Heads up: "I have a self-destruct system to activate." he said. Should be, "I have a self-destruct system to activate," he said. |
| piewacket 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseShadow- I really liked your last line. I don’t know the fandom so determining the effect of the change is difficult. You mentioned in your post that you wrote this quickly. You might wish to go back and do some editing for typos: frutition, Betrayel, comabt, receive, belive and concious. Those were some of the typos I caught. Good luck with the challenge. pie |
| The Oracle Dragon 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusesweet! |