oh damn...oh twenty five cents to the swear jar...lol i love it...so sweet, Squall is getting touchy feely with his love! hahahaha

WHOA! this story needs more fluffy like that! SO sweet for both boys!! loved it...i hope you do not plan to stop this story at chapter 7...i'd actually cry!

aw baby love...lol Cloud should have nothing against gay people...he was and i believe still is one...great chapter, sad but was writen with reason...lol Squall ran to Clouds bedroom!

oh yeah i love videos! simply grand! i'm ganna enjoy this reaction!

HAHA TOUCHY TOUCHY!! MORE TOUCH!! really great by the way...i was smiling throughout the whole thing!

hahahahaha Squall sparkled!! lol i love how close he is to letting things just slip...though i wish it was to Cloud...that would be so cute

hahahha i love it so far...i'll comment for every chapter, though they are already up...sorry if it bothers you...but i like letting writers with good skill know how each part effected the change in the story...i'm sort of a cridect i won't lie..lol anyways...on to chapter two!

Wow, I thought Cloud and Selphie's dad would be Cid, but I guess it's cool that you brought in an original character too! This was such a funny chapter XDD

I am reviewing. I want more

hm, do you breath between updates? lol, this was cute, especially the litle memories Leon was remembering, I love the image of a chibi-Squall saying he loves Cloud, so cute! lol while not neccessarily a bad thing, I think i really will die from cuteness overload...

Um yea... Pure freaking AWESOMENESS! So awesome to see the boys open up to eachother yet around others they keep their personal stuff... personal and keep an impassive outlook. I love it, and the angst is effing amazing!

i like this story so update soon.

Aw -hugs you- that was so cute, Ri-ki-ku!

... Are these up on the site yet? @_@

Anyway, It's so adorable. Leon and Cloud's chemistry is so wonderfully written. I like how Cloud was being a little shy and how he wasn't real articulate and yet he said just the right things. And Leon's realizing he loves Cloud still, despite the years, and is making an effort to speak to him now. The whole dramatic concept is really getting to me. I feel great. ^_^ Good job.

aw. i really like leon in this story, and i cannot wait until you update more so i can see how they will all develop!

am i a repeating machine? i seriously can't wait for the rest!!