This was brilliant,you are brilliant.I don't know how but you made a simple story a real masterpiece!

Guh. I love these far-away holiday-type fics. It was fantastic. I wish I could leave a coherent, intelligent review, but all I can really say is that it put a giant smile on my face. And that I would really love to go to Italy and meet my own personal Draco Malfoy. Sigh. XD It was fantastic.

Great Job, I loved it
LOL, I am now craving chocolate ice-cream =='

I love the way you wrote this piece. The you rather than I made it very personal, as if you were speaking to me, and not narrating. Brilliant job.

<3 Steel Scoprion

i love the end, he wanted to give her one reason to say yes :)

oh, i love this one! ^_^

and it made me hungry too. haha. i love italian food! XD

Lovely one shot, and I could go on about the emotions it made me feel, but I will focus on one thing instead. The Cinque Terre.

I just arrived home from spending the holidays in Liguria and I just have to say that your story manages to capture the essence of the over all feeling of the area. Even ironically, the man I rented a flat from was named Vincente. He has a darling mother who enjoys meeting his guests despite her age of 96 and carries around a large bundle of lasagna, she reminded me of the man with the lemons.

So I could go on about how I love the theme and how you wrote it and such, but I'll have to just deal with expressing my love for Liguria and how amazed I am to see it mentioned in such a heart-warming Dramione one shot.

Benissimo!

BEAUTIFUL! I really love this story.

lacrevette35

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic. Absolutly amazing.
Probably more so because not only is the interaction between Hermione and Draco very honest and real but beacuse ive totally fallen in love with this place.
I mean really.
Book me the next flight out there, and the crazy thing is, I will go, because i feel i just have to.
I dont really understand what 'person' this fic is written in but it is so cleverly done and really suits it. There is so much detail but it's been written so well that it just fits in. it's soo right.
Really well done
It's such a beautiful story
Thankyou.

YAYS =]

Oh my Godd. That was superb! Excellent! How CAN you write such lovely stories?! I swear, after I read the whole thing, delicious little tingles went down my spine, and-- and- that was just wonderful. Maybe it's the setting of Italy, or your way of writing, of describing, that made your story so riveting. I don't know. That was great. <3

Loved it!

-wc

Nice!

I think I've read this fic at least twice, if not three times over. Using the first-person-writing-as-third-person narrative does not often work well in many of the fics I've read, but you've nailed the technique here. It is totally in character for Hermione to do something like that - the style emphasises Hermione's efforts to rationalise her life by seeing her own life from a detached distance, like an observer. Thanks for writing a truly lovely story.

I loved the fact that these one-shots have so much depth- the characters really come alive. love it.

LOVE IT! your descriptions of Italy were beautiful and your attention to detail was amazing! you're very good at these DMHG one-shots :D

I loved this story, it had a fresh flirty feel, but with a mature weaving through it. The writinig was superb and your knowledge of Italy and Italian food is astounding.

Great One shot

SearchingformyEdward