Reviews for Betrayal, RIvalry and Pain

Jelly1029 2008-04-23 ch 9,	abuseUm, AMAZING. You are completely my savior. You have an awesome story (complete with plot and actual writing skill) and you don't make us wait days in between each chapter so you can get reviews! (sorry, I'm just lazy) Gives big hug! Gives oatmeal chocolate chip cookies! Gives tricycle! HEARTS!
The Bunnies Will Kill Us Al... 2008-04-22 ch 6,	abuseNot bad, but theyre a little marysue (okay A LOT marysue) with the exception of Glacie. Good story though, but add a little more discription as to what their surroundings are. In any case, update soon!
Jelly1029 2008-04-21 ch 6,	abuseHow come I'm the first to review? It's AMAZING! I completely love your story. Please update! I'll give you cookies!