I can't tell you how much I am loving this story right now! :) This is one of THE BEST Gummi Bears fics I have ever read! Seriously! :) And I'm also thrilled you decided to pair up Gusto and Gruffi! :) I LOVE that pairing! It's the only slash pairing in Gummi Bears that I actually like! Great job with this story! I'm so glad it's complete so I can read the whole thing! :) You're a fantastic writer!

Fantastic!
Read this fic from start to finish all in one night - a long night but well worth it ^^
I commend you on a wonderful story that you have written here, especially as they are all in characters.
Also it pleases me greatly that you have included all three clans in your story and more, and on top of that kept them all in character. Not an easy feat as I'm all too aware. :D
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story, I have favourited it, and now wait for your epilogue.
Please update soon.

One question though if I may ask.
How long do you intend the gummi lifespan to be?

Gummadoon I can understand because of the spell and that they re-appear every hundered 100 for 1 day, but Welsi and his son who are also over 500yrs old? How is that immortality broken now?

This story is gripping from start to finish. So many twists and turns but you kept them visible enough for me to keep track. I love how many characters you had involved: new gummies, glens, barbics, knights of Gummadoon...man! As a writer myself, I know how hard it can be to keep track of so many characters but you wove them together beautifully.

I love how you wrote all the relationships in here: Gruffi and Gusto's was excellent to see evolve and strengthen. Gritty and Ursa's was in character yet with enough spice to keep them intriguing. And my favorite, Buddi and Sunni's was quite sweet to read about; two sweethearts seemingly drifting apart then coming back together. Great job on all those spectrums.

Cubbi was an interesting character as well and while I would have liked to see more interactions written between him and Plucki, especially with all the magical brainwashing going on, you kept their relationship true to what it is with Cubbi still having respect for plucki and coming to grips with whom he wanted to be.

Needless to say, I really look forward to what other gummi fictions you have planned. I'm working on getting my fanfiction page updated so I can added your revamped versions of all these stories. The yreally deserve a ton of exposure! You're an excellent writer with a creative imagination. Keep it up!

Great story! Loved it!