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| timisnotmyname 2008-08-30 ch 1,  | abusei like it a lot. but i dont get one thing- what did Toph mean in the beginning? about how the universe loves to prove her wrong? hm... PM me if u hav 2! |
| Katsumara 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseHaha! That was great. It's nice hearing about the emotions going on all at once from a blind person's point of view instead of just seeing them. You get a whole new collection of descriptions along with it. I loved the end though with Toph taking out her anger with the rock to Sokka's head. Poor guy. He's suffered so much. Good thing he has Suki to help him. xD |
| Neon Starz 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great story! I thought u did a wonderful job with this! I also loved the ending, lol. Thank you for your time of writing this! ^^ |
| Kataang1337 2008-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job.I really like the way you wrote from Toph's point of view.It seems so real,the heartbeats and breathing patterns seen by her Earthbending.Sokka's girly shriek of pain was simply hilarious. |
| Taromaru 2008-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. It was very in-character and it's a scenario I could see playing in the actual show. As for the trailer, there's no need for concern. Mike and Brian assured us that Kataang is going to happen before Season 3 even came out since they stated that Kataang is the romance and DNA (their words) of the series since the beginning. Maiko is also their second favorite(Brian even said "they're great together.") and have always denied Zutara whenever asked about it; Dee Bradley himself told one Zutarian at the Comic Con last year that "You know that's not going to happen, right?". This is just the creators screwing with the Zutara fanbase again like they did with the previews of CoD or when Zuko kidnapped Katara. |
| Vegan Star 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay, your Avatar stories are wonderful! You and Lyralocke give me so much hope! LOL. Seriously, after the trailer, I need to absorb some great Kataang. Please write more! Also, Toph rules. No doubt about that ;) |
| I Took The 405 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusei liked it but the battle scene was like super hard to understand. but great story =D |
| CantHelpThisSmile 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusei know tv and im pretty sure the trailer was to mess with Zutarians, but it gave me an urge to yell bad words since i know theyll all think theyre right maybe they are i doubt it AH! yeah. the NYCC trailer causes much screaming. sorry i really liked this and i agreed with the authors note, because katara and zuko are good as friends |
| Trilobitemk7 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseGirly shriek of pain.. hahahahaha |
| MDI 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseDamn, the trailer was awesome, but it puts me in serious doubt about ATLA's Kataangness :( Anyway, onto your oneshot. I liked it a lot, you did a good job on Toph's POV. I really love the ending too, fanfics rarely make me smile, but that last sentence was just too awesome :p. Actually I don't have anything bad to say, so this'll just be a "good one" review. Looking forward to more stories from you :-) Cheers! |
| TwilightG 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it, I thought you did very well! It's sad though, that the series will be ending soon... sniffle sniffle. |
| Ratava100d 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abusei think that was really good well done ^_^! |