Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Those were the perfect songs to emphasize the emotions in this story! Perfect!

oh my god u had me going there, though u might have killed bones haha, but loved the fluffy ending x

I so glad she didn't die. great story

I love that song. Your vivid descriptions of actions and details is impeccable. Just the tiny things from him sinking down to his knees at her lap to the crinkle of the paper to their cheeks resting before their lips turned to meet each other. Very nice. I could see it all play out like that without having to fill in the details myself.

You have a very distinct writing style and I get a different feeling than when I read others. Mark of a true author. I always have very different, distinct feelings connected to each of the authors I read and I get that with you too.

Nice job.

Just a tiny bit of concrit... I was a little confused about the whole bullet thing as they are dancing at a fancy formal and then suddenly there's bullets whizzing through the air? I loved the whole setting with them dancing and her in the beautiful dress but it might have come off more realistic if she would have been shot during one of their stakeouts or chasing after a suspect or even a mention that there had been a hit out on her or something. That being said, it wasn't that big of a deal and I accepted it easily enough.

Thanks for posting. I really enjoyed.

Ali

I don't want to be rude, but the story is a bit lame.