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Sasural
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
Beautiful...
I think that's the only emotional story that has really moved me into crying so much that it hurt. I loved it. It was so well written and I actually connected wwith Yamamoto's emotions as I read it. I love my dad so very much, and i'm never to take him for granted ever again. Your story really moved me like no other... just thought i should let you know.
You are a talented writer and i'd be honored to read more of your work in the future...

-Sasural
saxgirl42
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. I can totally understand TYL!Yamamoto being emotional, so don't worry about that, and I think you captured his thoughts really well. Nice job all around! :)
hoodoo80
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
I liked this a lot. I feel like you really captured a lot of the emotions that would run through someone's head if they ever had the chance to go back in time and talk to the dead.
Courgette
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
Oh my.
I really enjoyed this.
Probably because TYL Yamamoto is one of my favourites, and probably because I adore the more serious KHR stuff.
Beautifully written, and very touching. It's a lovely idea, too :D it made me want to cry!
la
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
oh damn...crying D:
too sweet and sad for me...
merissala
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Wow... i loved reading this. I dont think he was too emotional, my mom is still alive but the thought of her out of my life makes me cry. (maybe I'm being emotional too.. D;) Still, this story makes me very touched.
Amandy-san
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
Kawai!
I'm crying now, it's so beautiful!

Great Job!

Kiss ;*

**Sorry for my suck english
Saiyukigallie
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
Anou sa, I love the takeshi-ccentric fic~! I understand him, neeh, why does he have to loose his dad in the future arc? *whines*

Haha, probably I know. Anyway, I love the fic! ^^ *faves*

Sai
Kibou Yami
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
That was so heart warming and saddening. I can just imagine Yamamoto doing that too. You've really captured their personalities.
Irenukka
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
That was short but beautiful...

I cried a bit at the end too. I can imagine Yamamoto just as you described~ Great fic :)
lizzieliz
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
It's so beautifully written. I love it. And it's so sad too. Awesome!
StrawberryPop
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
Aww, really touching. Keep up the nice work!
LHaZE-cHAn
2008-04-23 . chapter 1
whoa.. i almost cried here! i like the way you made the older yamamoto mature through his emotions... this is great!
Patka91
2008-04-22 . chapter 1
Awesome :) I hope you'll write more of this kind :)
Asuka-dono
2008-04-22 . chapter 1
-super sad- Aw why did you haff to write this, why did I haff to read it...

Poor Yamamoto-kun -tears up- SO UNFAIR!
na, his father died for a noble cause, ne?

It was a bit OCC, but then again the manga/anime has yet to show a broken Yamamoto. -nods- I accept it! -thumbs up-
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