Reviews for Rage Virus: Files

xCullenxCrazyx 2008-07-13 ch 1,	abuse'S'pretty good. You've got an interesting writing style, I like the interview, the way you don't use punctuation...It's an interesting technique =] Can I ask how you know so much about the military? 'Tis noted in your other stories too...
Fayeana 2008-05-14 ch 5,	abuseDon't delete it :) It's just fine as it is ;) Keep it up!
thunderbellyemm 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseLiking the story so far, but man is the 'story-in-the-brackets' thing bugging me! It would make it a lot better if you didn't do that (not just because it bugs me) but for everyone. It's like I'm reading a script and not a story. (It'll also give us a better visual) Also, make sure you try and describe things more eh, like, not just write dialogue, or what the guy's thinking-because I know that what the place looks like would prolly be the last thing on his mind, but for the readers. Plus, it'll make your stories longer and up the av. on your words per story! Good job! Can't wait for the next chapter! (any questions, complaints, rants ex. - message moi! :3)