This was very interesting. I've had a glimpse of this pairing, and it was in Lake Laogai, too. Haha. Mine was when they were all standing at the lake's shore and Toph found the underwater passage: Katara and Longshot were standing next to each other and they just looked kind of cute, even though they barely knew each other.

You have an amazing writing ability. I wish I could write as well as you can. And I agree with daydream11, in which that you kept the point that they didn't match but at the same time they do. That ws so amazing, and the way you wrote it was amnazing.

Overall, the story is amazing. Great job. Keep up the great work! XD

~Taylor

Interesting. I like. =)

That was nicely written. I've never heard of Katara and Longshot together, they never talk and they hardly look at each other. But I guess that's what makes this story so great!

wow, this is very nice. i don't remember longshot too well (isn't he the one who was following zuko and his uncle around in ba sing se?) anyway, yeah, i haven't read anything with this pairing and it sounds very romantic, hehe, love the way you wrote this, keep it up, i look forward to more as always! XD

Wow. I really, really enjoyed this. It's such an odd couple, but just with anything you write, you nailed it perfectly. I loved the quiet. I loved the feelings underneath that Katara was feeling, and the feelings she knew Longshot was going through too.

You are made of awesome!

this was completely and truly amazing,
and i am now in love with the pairing
itself,
you did a beautiful job, wonderful job :D
kudos :)

This is breathtakingly beautiful. You are truly talented

Yup, I read it. I found it on my LJ flist and had to rad it, since it's so much of an off-key pairing.

And I love how you kept it that way. Like they don't match but they do somehow, and they appreciate each other and blend into each other without asking questions. It's an effortless love, considering their struggles (or, at least, Katara's), and quietly beautiful.

Brava, darling. You owned this.

XOXO daydream11

I was taken by surprise by your choice of pairing, but you made it work really, really well. You have a beautiful style.