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Sapphire09
2009-02-10 . chapter 5
I love this !! Update soon !
Lelouch V'BXVII
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
Oh my God, tell me that the continuity, please, I can not believe that ends well.

Fic a wonderful, so full of emotion, has left me wanting to read more.

Please continualo not worth it let unfinished, a serious waste of a good fiction.

Has to wait for upgrade, after all we are for the fans.

Good luck and thanks for a good fiction, I hope it continues.

Atte. LelouchV'BXVII

PS: forgive my bad English, but it is my native language is Spanish, and I do not speak much English.
LadyNightSky
2008-09-27 . chapter 5
I absolutely LOVE this story. It travels the emotions from whimsical and silly to heartbreaking and poignant. Though the premise is lighthearted, the characters are very well-written, and the storyline is creative and flowing. I really hope you find the inspiration and time to update this soon--I'll definitely look forward to it.

:)Bee
Infinite sky
2008-07-18 . chapter 5
0_0 That was...heart wrenching...I just wanted to cry! Poor Fllay and Athrun! Prince...you sure like to hurt him eh?? So that you can comfort him again! Well, Athrun NEEDS a hug RIGHT NOW! *hugs Athrun*

I love the way you discribed Athrun's feelings when he heard his father, it was really emotional! You good writer you! *hugs*

( loved Rau's profile!!)

You know no matter what other people say about Patrick, I know that he really loved Athrun but had a hard time expressing it and Athrun loved his father as much but also couldn't express it the way he wanted, they could only do that when Lenore was around...when she died it just made everything worse between them :(
So I loved that Father/Son moment ^_^

Come one, make the other chapter! I'll be waiting! *sits down and grabs cookie jar*
Melicress
2008-07-15 . chapter 5
SQUEE!! Sorry, I had a moment :D

This is so great! I just love the way you write things, you keep all the characters IC no matter what happens, and your plots are always interesting and complex! I love it!! *gives you orange peko shortbread cookies*

HUGS!!
Melicress
ShiningGalaxy
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Great! Loved it! Keep up the good work!
Mikachuu
2008-07-10 . chapter 5
Great chapter! I loved the bit at the end with Athrun and Patrick. But I get this sense of foreboding...like it probably won't last. Can't wait for the next chapter!
-X-xx-Sazza-xx-X-
2008-07-05 . chapter 5
that was great i l-o-v-e-d it

keep writing and if you have any ideas for my stroy plese inform me

this is getting more and more interesting
Milisante
2008-07-01 . chapter 5
I'm very glad you've overcome your block^^
Another great chapter! So Athrun's back to his father... I wonder...
What's next...
Update soon!

p.s. sorry for the late review ^^
reckless-rage
2008-06-30 . chapter 5
I am too lazy to log in. XD Anyway, awesome chapter! I scooted over to read it as soon as I got the email. I got two of them, oddly enough.

It's getting more and more realistic, isn't it? I liked the Fllay-Athrun confrontation. Do update soon~!
Xx-Erin-xX-AthrunxCagallifan
2008-06-28 . chapter 5
aw sweet reunion between Athrun and his father but something tells me that it isn't what it seems! might just be me being suspicious but i don't trust Patrick Zala... poor Athrun, i hope things don't turn out bad for him!!
great chapter!
Mikachuu
2008-06-06 . chapter 4
I really love this idea, and the story's getting really interesting! The bit with Shinn at the beginning was very true to his character. And poor Athrun got drugged! I hope you update soon! :D
Xx-Erin-xX-AthrunxCagallifan
2008-05-24 . chapter 4
yay, i finally reviewed!! anyways, I love this story so much and can't wait to see it updated! Hmm, if Fllay is in the game and Mayu was... who else could be? hmm, curious!
well update soon!
Erin-chan
agsd
2008-05-24 . chapter 4
I love you! This fic is amazing. I love fics that don't focus on romance and have well written adventure. It's a pity their so rare though. Thank you! Now write more and update faster!
-X-xx-Sazza-xx-X-
2008-05-17 . chapter 4
a man with a mask that sounds like Rau le creuset, first shinn see his sister and then kira see flay this odd but i love it all the same keep going
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