Reviews for Small Compensation

Reviews For: Small Compensation

Xbakiyalo 2008-09-19 ch 1,	abuseAw man why are you so good at writing? Your originality is brilliant, and the way you describe the situation in this is just fantastic. You're very talented. I hope to see more Death Note from you :) Keep writing!~~
??? 2008-08-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseI enjoyed this immensely. Congrats, I have added you to the list of authors whose pages I stalk every other week to check. In short, congratulations. You've got a stalker. ^_^ Nah. Joking. XD But I DO love your work, and if I ever get off my lazy butt and get an account, you will be under favorites. ^_^ This is the first Death Note actual fanfiction (Unless owner's manuals count...) I've ever read. And now you have me addicted. THANK YOU! So when I get an account, I'll come back and review under it so you can yell at me for being a stalker. :) -One of FanFiction's Many, Many, Many Unnamed Users.
Peter Rabid 2008-08-08 ch 1,	abuseWow. I love Near, him being blunt as ever. And trying to guilt-trip Sayu into talking. A really interesting idea, and well-written. Kudos. Ciao, Peter Rabid
WithABunny 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. You've done a wonderful job on this one. This, I think, is probably one of my most favorite angst fics in the DN fanfic-verse, if not THE one. I love how you've kept the characters IC, and for Mrs. Yagami, who is actually OOC here, you've justified it. I can definitely see why she would be so angry. Oh, and that ending line - that just finished the story off in all the right ways. I have a question, by the way - Did you really mean for this fic to be under the Parody category, or was that just a mistake? Anyway, great job! I wish more people would review this, it deserves more than what it's received so far! I think I'm in love with this pairing now.
SexySpoonsWillRuleUsAll 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseWay to make me feel guilty, jeez... "In short, there is nothing wrong with you, except yourself." I killed myself laughing at this. Near's bluntness does that to me, a lot. He's dead inside 'cos he doesn't have Mello! OF COURSE! AND SAYU SPEAKING WILL ACTIVATE A DEUS EX MACHINA WHICH WILL RESTORE MELS TO LIFE IN SOME WAY WHICH DOESN'T MAKE ANY LOGICAL SENSE! Of course! That's what Sayu let down! Did you know that in the Death Note pilot, the dead were brought back to life by erasing the name from the notebook? It's true! Pity that damn Takada burnt my name and I kinda got pierced by all this glass... Um. Okay, seriously, in regard to the story? It was good. Sayu's random comments to Light were depressing. Poor girl, she always suffers so much. And she's so cute, I go "KAWAI DESU DESU" whenever she comes on screen in the movies. ...stop pointing the figure of blame at me... I find it very interesting with Sachiko supporting Kira. I get the feeling she was doing it just to contradict Near, but I can see her wishing he was still alive, and not just 'cos ZOMG LIGHT IS KIRA OHSHIZ SPOILERZ! but because in the time when he was still killing, things actually would've seemed to have been going very well. Light with a steady and famous girlfriend, getting 100 percent on that university exam, entering the police force and all that. I don't know how to word what I'm trying to say XD Dammit Sayu, speak up! I wanna see Near again! ...so I can kick his **... yes. Nice job :)
Island Of the Ships 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abusewow. lotta angst you be having there, though beautifully written. i'm so happy you wrote a death note story, it was exquistily fantastic and tragic (kinda). i loved that ending sentence, it finishes everything nicely. still love your writing. cheers.
Draculina17 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseMe liked it!

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