 Threshie 10/1/01 . chapter 10Awww, it ended so suddenly! ;_; What about poor Zelgadis-chan? He's just going to wonder around in the labyrinth for the rest of his life, working under Xellos and never knowing what happened to Lina? *sniff* I feel sorry for him, especially since he seemed pretty upset about what happened to her.. Mayebe what I'm trying to say is, the fic's sorta anticlimatic, y'know? All that emotional build-up between Zel and Lina, and then with the way it ended, it seems like it didn't go the way it was supposed to. Dunno, maybe it's just me.. Well, it didn't end quite like I thought it would or wanted it to, but it was still a good read, so good job! ;; Besides, I've never seen/read Labyrinth before, so I realy dunno how the story was *supposed* to turn out, anyway.. |