I am flabbergasted! How do you write so well?! BB were in character, and hilarious in addition. The last chapter was especially funny! And I absolutely loved the sexual tension. You made a very convincing murder case too!

This is great! My first thought was, "This is exactly like the show!" The dialogue in your story flows so smoothy and the plot is moving forward quickly. Plus, the characters are genuine, not to mention hilarious! I can't wait to read the rest!

Amazing story and you achieved what you wanted - this is a perfect Bones episode - simply perfect.
Great writing, great bantering, great chemistry between all characters, a clever plot - simply a perfect match for everything.
I definitely enjoyed reading it - and that happenend in no time, thanks to that wonderful writing style of yours.
Too bad this isn't a real episode ... it would be worth one!

Thnaks for sharing this with us,

Kat

nice fic :)

Wow.
This is the best Bones fanfic I've read for a very long time. Characters perfectly in-character, the bickering and especially the X-Files..hahaha.

I look forward to more stories from you. :)

One just has to love Angela and Zack, right? Ah Zack, I miss him...

Hee. Awesome dialogue, some of the best bickering I've read in a long time! Loved this. :)

I have to admit, I usually don't really like Bones Fanfics but, this was brilliant, absolutely brilliant!! I couldn't stop reading it. Truly addictive! It was so true to the characters and extremely well written. If I didn't know any better I would have said that you had just wrote down an episode script in greater detail. Amazing, really! I am SO adding you to my favorite author list.

Sweets is very clever!

holy crapola...that was awesome! You had all of them down to a 'T'.

The mirroring and role-play with Sweets was totally hilarious. The case was alright too. What I thoroughly enjoyed was B&B's bickering.

I LOVED this one - you did such a fine job with not only keeping everyone in character, but also piecing together the case (which I always find to be the hardest). I'm very impressed and hope that you manage to tear yourself away from real life every once in a while to write us another story :)

i absolutely loved the ending. i love sweets, and his therapy sessions are amusing.

hm i'm thinking either the tutor or amy. maybe his mom even, but i doubt it. the tutor probably wanted to keep it a secret so her husband wouldn't go to jail, maybe.
anyway, good fic. my suspicions are probably off, but oh well. i like it, and i like that it's not predictable like a lot of other murder fics.

i bet it was his mom, or the husband of his tutor...
anyway, i love the booth and brennan moments
i hope they get together, or at least go on a date or something by the end of this.
heck even if booth beat up adams, i'd be fine with that. :)