Reviews for Unexpected Surprises!

Reviews For: Unexpected Surprises!

babygirltee 2008-08-08 ch 1,	abuseARE? YOU? EVER? GOING? TO? UP-DATE? I REALLY MISS YOUR STORY.
HeavenlyKitten 2008-08-01 ch 8,	abuseWhat?! Wow a woman that looks like Patrick's mother. I'm intrigued about the next chapter. Sorry it took a little while, but I'm dealing with computer viruses. Urgh! It's a pain in the behind. Great job on this chapter.
HeavenlyKitten 2008-06-17 ch 7,	abuseI absolutly enjoyed this chapter a lot. The reaction to the outfit was The breakfast with Derek and Meredith was good, but Patrick talking to Elizabeth the way he did was funny! Mainly while he was on the phone with Robin. I really liked this chapter I look forward to reading more.
HeavenlyKitten 2008-05-14 ch 6,	abuseAww. This was an amazing chapter! They finally admitted how they feel to each other. The shopping was fun. Leave it to Maxie to try and get her laid...lol. Then angain with Patrick as her husband I think she could wear a moomoo and he'd still wanna have sex with her. LOL. I like how you made Carly a friend of hers too and her new shopping buddy. I hate that they always fight on the show even though they have their reasons for hating each other. Anyhow I also loved the ankel braclett scene. The writers should take a look at some fanfiction when they write because I can so see this on the show. Great job.
babygirltee 2008-05-08 ch 5,	abuseI am LOVING your story but WHAT!is with tease of one chapter. PLEASE up-date ASAP.I AM GOING THROUGH WITHDRAWLS HERE!
Brittany 2008-05-05 ch 5, anon.	abuseOMG this chapter is totally awesome!! i think u did an excellent job with the date and them admitting their feelings for oneanother! i can totally see some of this stuff actually be played out on screen, or some on the things they would actually say!! The scenes and things you do with this story is amazin! ur doing an amazin job and i cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter,plz update soon!!
HeavenlyKitten 2008-05-05 ch 5,	abuseYay they finally kissed! Wow. I enjoyed this chapter a lot. They are so cute together.
HeavenlyKitten 2008-04-30 ch 4,	abuseHe knows she loves him! He better catch up to her and they need to make up. They both love each other it'sclaer to everyone, but themselves. I'm waiting for more.
HeavenlyKitten 2008-04-23 ch 3,	abuseI liked this chapter. They're so in love with each other and they wanted this marriage. Thier friends are right. I ahd to smile at a sulking Patrick. LOL. Yeah the new Patrick was funny. The smut was just great. I look forward to reading more of this.
Brittany 2008-04-23 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is such a great story i love it!! and i like that u made robin and carly friends and i think the four grils and guys that are friends to patrick r perfect!! i really hope they start working things out and things look up for them!! awesome job though, more soon!
HeavenlyKitten 2008-04-22 ch 2,	abuseOh wow I luaghed when Robin was telling Patrick she was not his maid. My ol'man think the same way it wouldn't kill you to iron one shirt. Or cook a meal every now and then. LOL. He knows I hate cooking, but there are times I get a crazy bug up my butt and want to not that he ever eats it... Anyhow I really like this story and the people you threw in for them to turn to was surprisingly great. Maxie and Emily. Jax and Lucky. This is going to be a great story. I look forward to reading more.
HeavenlyKitten 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseIt's Vegas. I told my boyfriend we should go there no wonder he laughed and said no... LOL. Everyone who goes to Vegas comes back married or broke. Sometime both. LOL. I like this so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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