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Spice of Life
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abusePeople need to get over themselves. It was funny, it wasn't offensive. Songfics are against the guidelines too, but about a million people do them.

I actually laughed out loud on a few of them, especially just the "What would you do if I sang out of tune?" one.
SonicFan8780
2008-06-14
ch 1,
abuselol this is SO FUNNY! You have to make more
Zealous Scribbler
2008-06-07
ch 1,
abuseHa, I loved it! I can picture all of these things happening to Max, poor guy. You should make a story like this for Jude.

~Kaytlin
Slightly Meeko
2008-05-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseHaha. Very nice!!

Just a thought: He'd shave it if Sadie said he couldn't wear her shirts if he had a mustache.
xXcowferXx
2008-05-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI've got another one for you.

Duct tape him to a chair, then shave it off telling him you'll keep him there forever if he doesn't let you.

I myself do not mind the moustache.
Cattiechaos
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseOH ROFL, this was freakin HILLARIOUS xD
I LOVED #5 xD GO JEWISH PEOPLE!
And #7
and #10
and #40

KICKASS x]
adriflippinana
2008-04-26
ch 1, anon.
abusei like it is very nice but u should make im join army or summtin cu z they make u shave so gas mask have air tight seal eh:)
spectacularspectacular
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abusepaha!!


this makes me happy
:]
Melissa
2008-04-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseLMFAO THATS AMAZING AHAAH = ]
sapphirehearts
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseHi. This was okay but it's not really a story. Just saying. It's more like a list just in sentence format.(Pet peeve of mine when people don't follow guidelines.)

Not to be mean or anything, but I don't think you should have put number 19 in. The cancer one. My friend is a cancer survivor and I just think it's kind of offending towards people who have it. You can't really give someone cancer. I know it's your 'list' and it's not real but I still think you shouldn't have put that one in. Just my opinion.


Write stories not lists.

--Meg
dreamXbig
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuse//Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.//

This is from the guidelines of what is not allowed, which you agreed to. It definitely does not belong on this site, as funny as you think it may be, it shouldn't be here.

And personally, I find some of these rather offensive, especially the one about 'giving him cancer'. I don't understand how you can make a joke about something as serious as that. Think before you write things like that.

S.
Sheena Is A Punk Rocker
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseomg! i couldn't stop laughing! XD
i especially liked #5, cuz it's true. Us Jews ARE known for miracles! lol *prays for the miracle of the moustache*
and im glad u wrote this, cuz i can't stand Max's stupid moustache! so at least SOME1 agrees with me!
Sparks Diamond
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseVery funny and entertaining! I loved it!
Max's moustache does not suit him at all lol... but he still rocks...
Jude's Girlfriend
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseha-HA! fabulous... Anything to get him to shave that grotty thing off.
I WANT MORE.
kate
2008-04-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseomg...that was so funny
i would like more but u dont have to its just really funny
and for the record i hate maxs moustache!
but i love max lol :P
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