Dark but meaningful. I like your take on what would happen if L and Light repressed their feelings for each other. It's good! _

"I will create the god and let go of the man, shedding all that comes with such a meaningless word"...wow that line is impressive...pretty much sum all those sad and gory things Light has to do...such as killing L...kill is such a sad word...T_T...but nevertheless, this oneshot was dripping with sadness, regrets, remorse, and resignation...wonderuflly done!...although i hate Light for doing what he did..T_T

oh this was very well written. i really like this.

Incredibly depressing. I feel dead now, ._.

At least it's a true view on the relationship, of sorts.

I love it! And I normally hate depressing things, but this was just great! I especially love the phrases you used, like 'It was the longing to live that killed so many in the end'

I can really see Raito having these thoughts, especially if he realised that he was slowly giving away his humanity. Maybe if Raito had realised, Ryuk wouldn't have gotten bored...

Humanity, no matter how hard it fought, was always destined to die.

Wow...I forgot to submit a review!

Awesomely awesome! Best drabble I ever read! I know its a shame the whole Kira battle happened, because if it didn't...well...that's what the AU fics are for, ne? XP

I liked how you put all those feelings that Light felt. Yep. L was the first to give his life some meaning.

Great drabble!

Poetry. Sad but nice, very nice. It depicts what Raito would be feeling.

Wow. That was so beautiful

Keep up the good work!

True this was depressing but it is also very good.

Keep it up!:)

So different from the other things I've read by you. Depressing, and yet, very good as well. I liked it.

I like it, too. It has a certain depth to it that I found quite interesting and enjoyable to read. I can't help but wonder what the words in bold italics are, though... Anywho, this was definitely a change of atmosphere after reading a chapter of Discordant Harmony, lol. Nice one Ja ne!

This pretty depressing compared to you other work, I like that you can switch back and forth like that

That sure isn't humor O_o

I really love it. It fits SO well into the canon ! I love how you depicted Raito's feelings... I like to think that Light did become Kira by killing L. Or is that because of my shipper googles ? (well, it's from that time that he speaks more of god and less of justice... and the timeskip has nothing to do with it of course... fufu)

This was incredibly moving. I love writing styles that use imagery and display a poetic feel to them.

This just made my day.

Aww... that was quite sad... Hmm... very good job!