That was SUCH a great story!I just wished she didn't die and it would've lasted longer!Well I just wanted to say ur a great writer!

I think the first chap was great!

omg i loved it!

its really sad at the end tho.

but its still amazing.

-Luna Carter

omg that was excellent im nearly cryin !

I just read the whole story; and I LOVED IT!

You made me cry at the end though :'(

dun dun DUN! ;D

I like it so far . . . god, I really have to see this movie again. :D

i cant belive i cried or the fact that im admiting it (something i never do) but you did a good job

ha ha ha... i want a sequel, but i think you should wait for the movie sequel first. they ARE making one, right? anyway,. awesome job. i watched the movie today, and as i read this, i recognized that some of amber's quotes were from griffin. if i havn't said it yet, good job!

The story was great. I'm glad it sorta intgrated your character into the Jumper world. I think you did a fantastic job.

Like your spin on the story. Very good. Keep it up.

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Post the sequel asap please!

I absolutley LOVED this story! the Best Griffin/OC story ever!

i thought it was awesome! griffin is so...hot when he's trying to be tough when he KNOWS it's not gonna work. and don't worry about torturing him, i do that all the time to my fav characters. btw, i don't know how to give private messages either! sry!

Loved it, great story. You should so make more.

I loved it!