Reviews for Pain in The Plucking

Musashi 9 Bellaandedwardlov... 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseIloved it and, I am happy that when he put his finger on her lips, that she didn't kiss the finger, cause thats something Edwrad would do, and something that Bella would be too Embarrassed doing, also can oyu expain ow Edwrad never found out my reading Alices mind what she was up too. Also, I like how you didn't say "Bella aBlushed," you said, she felt the warmth spread, her face grew into a brighter red, etc. well done.
kayura sanada 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseYay! This was a first, and SO true! There were a couple grammar mess-ups (which we're all prone to), and a couple places went a smidge fast, but overall it was very well done. ^^ Thanks for writing this!
Blue421 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is so cute! Very nice.
dragonrider713 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseVery cute. I feel Bella's pain; plucking is such a pain (no pun intended!). I love it!
amgglekim 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abusecute...
MartaSwan 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseihih funny and well written. i liked it baci Marta
Edward4eva 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abusereally funny loved it
XotroyellaoX 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseaww, that was really cute actually, i don't have anything to say cause it was just really great! i honestly love it:D
Bookish.Spazz 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseAh, beks, you mislead me! When you said womanly act I was thinking of maybe her period, or a bikini wax! But then I saw your title, so yes it was just me being weird. Haha great story tho! haha.