This was brilliant.

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^^ Oh man, great start! Haha, I kinda guessed that it was really Leon- I mean, come one Cloud, it was really your subconscious acting! Excellent story- please continue soon.

irnoy is so fun, isnt it? cant wait to read more un^^

Wow...boy, have you two really given me somthing to look forward to!! I'm a bit new to your work, so I never read the old arc, but this was just amazing. I loved it. And it's nice to see how concerned you were with keeping Cloud and Leon in character, that you were willing to try anew and start again. I'm so glad you did. I can't wait for the next part of the Nonadventures Arc! Please post soon, although I know you have a schedule you're following and all, cuz you're really on top of things :). Hope to see the next update soon, and keep your inspiration and amazing-ness going!

Heh, I was actually thinking it was Leon before Tifa was alluded to. Poor Cloud and his confuzzled brain. *hearts*

Yuffie's reaction was awesome, and I love how you're incorporating her connection with Zack. God, she was a pest in CC. XD

Much love for the canon! I was able to visualize everything in this so well, and I'm really looking forward to more of these. :D

That was really interesting! Very well-written and intriguing. I can't wait to see what you two do with this plot!

Aww. That was so sweet. Poor confused Cloud.

XD Cloudy thought Squally was Tifa! XD Nice...YAY! Zack's alive but is sephy really dead?! This is so good I cant wait to read more its so exciting!
UPDATE ASAP OR ELSE A BOSSY MOOSE WILL RUN YOU OVER!

Yush! o_o The Machination strikes again! I love you guys! Awesome start on this arch! I look forward to more! Cloud and Leon are the hotest couple ever! (Folowed by Riku and Sora, of course. XD) Thank you for the story!

Yay Zack's back!! Poor Leon's probably hurt but Cloud wasn't exactly with it so it's not totally his fault...

I APPROVE OF THE NEW NONADVENTURES ARC! *thumbs up*

And Zack's in it! A great addition to the story, I suppose. I never played the game, just watched the movie, but he seems like a fun guy. Oh, Cloud kissed Leon! Hee hee. I loved Leon's words to him afterward. It had to be awkward for him! :) But Cloud liking Tifa is kind of weird. Not that I don't support them, it's just that I'm so used to Cloud/Aerith or something. This is off to a great start! I can't wait for more!

And...I don't REALLY believe that Sephiroth is dead. The man can't die! The world would implode if that happened. He's too sexy for that! Lol.

x3 Very excited for this new arc! Although, I am a bit sad to see the old one go. This new one seems to be quite promising and very interesting though, so I can't wait for the next part!

omg! XD I am absoulutely in love with this new piece of work! Excellent job you two! *melts away* can't wait for more ^^

Oh wow, I lurve canon fics.

I've been bamboozled!

I had to go back to the beginning and read the scene with "Tifa" again just to affirm how vague it was. I should have guessed. And Zack's arrival brought a huge smile to my face. I wish you guys lots of luck on your new arc, and I'm definitely sticking around to read more.