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Akira no Kitsune
2009-01-02 . chapter 11
Hi! This is a good story! Keep writing! LOL Chase got headbutted ^.^ I hope he doesn't die though. I like Him... The beginning of the story was kinda confusing, but it got clearer, so good job. So, update soon! Bai!
Shadir
2008-10-10 . chapter 9
I didn't say that Fung was bad, I only said that he had a past with dark tint.

Kimiko and Clay together, like me.

Raimundo and Wuya... that if that was disgusting º~º

And at this time I am preparing a great arsenal go to leave in very small pieces to which I cut him the hand to Jack >_
Elena
2008-07-12 . chapter 7
Ashley this alive one... rays! Good you are who writes and they are your likes and the respect.

So Fung had a dark side in its past that interesting.

Now we will see as goes to Chase with those types.
raikimckr
2008-07-12 . chapter 3
hey i just starting reading this, nd i like it, but one thing is totally drivin me insane...its rai, not ray. thats all, awesome story
Elena
2008-06-20 . chapter 6
Does the zombies eat cookies? I ask because I would like to send them a box to take charge of the Ashley (it is noticed that I don't like her) ^^

Now they have the Master Fung and they go after Chase. For that seen the action goes to the big thing.
Elena
2008-06-01 . chapter 5
They are bad and crazy.
xsmokeandmirrorsx
2008-04-29 . chapter 4
o kewl :) i like this story, its a little complex but i will get it more with more chapters. Cnt wait till chase makes an appearence :P hope he kicks that guys arse for hurtin jack :) update soon?

xx
Shadir
2008-04-28 . chapter 4
And they didn't make anything to Ashley... rays! *grunts*
xxFireWarriorxx
2008-04-22 . chapter 3
OMG! This sounds totally awesome so far! Great description - you actually made me cringe (something that rarely happens :D) and I can tell the plot is gonna be deep... update soon!

xxFireWarriorxx
Raimundoroks
2008-04-22 . chapter 3
who is this guy? It leaves me wondering...
Shadir
2008-04-21 . chapter 3
Did it remove him the hand to Jack? Damned son of...!

Continued please!
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