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Reviews For: Zach's new friend

saragillie
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abuseMy roommates has pet rats. One was kind of cute, but the other was fat and lazy. Cute story. I knew it was gonna be a rat or a snake...
xHodgepodgex
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseAww! I have rats too!
*Busts into asylum and steals Zach*
Genius.
HikariSora
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was too cute. :-) Good job
Time and Fate
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseaw, that's such a cute little story
songbird of the theater
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseAw! That was darling!! I love Zach!! Now that he has a rat he should focus on getting the girl.
mumrulz
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseNot really a rat person nor - dare I say it - a Zach person, but I did enjoy this one shot.

I would have thought that any pet that Zach had would end up neglected & dead!'

Loved all the detail you went into with Zach putting platforms on the cage & the having to redo them, the trouble with the plastic bags, & then having to keep going back to vacuum, I really thought that maybe they were mice & that he would end up sucking at least one of them up the vacuum cleaner. I should have had more faith in Zach! :-):-):-)
Nanda
2008-04-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseFunny! Good job.
Gummysweets
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseaww how sweet im guessing albert as in albert einstien(spelling?)?
I do have a name
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abusethat was really cute. great plot.
kathiann
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseI knew it was going to be a rat. I love pet rats. They are so cuddly and loving. If you get them from a baby they will just sit in your lap all day long. The boy rats have a tendency to dribble all the time though. I love the story. I love Bones, I love rats. Now I sound like a freak. I had a pet rat, my ex got her in the divorce. He also got the cats, I miss them. Thanks for cheering me up. great writing. I look forward to your next piece. Oh, and you can watch the whole show on the fox website in like 2 days, that's what I have to do (no dvr, no vcr).
HollywoodDramaQueen
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseThat was a cute story! I almost thought Zack was going to have a snake with him, though, when Hodgins mentioned Angela freaking out.

And I hear you on being upset about missing Bones. I'll have to miss next Monday's due to a scholarship night at my school (that was originally supposed to be next Tuesday and had the date changed...) and I'm about ready to kill somebody. I'll probably set at least two different recordings just to make sure I get it. Sorry your recording screwed up tonight!
CSI-4077
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseAw, if I were there I'd give you a hug. I had to race home to make it. I really do feel for you.

This was cute, gotta love Zach eh? Man does he need a girl.

Another great story!

Leah
rebekadunn
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuselol there's just one problem with this story rats can't have fluff in there cage coz they get there feet caught in it and either cut the curculation of or cut the whole fool off :P but good job :P i only know that about rats coz when my rat hadd babies i looked it up and found that out:P except 4 that 1 bit i liked it :P
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