wow!
The Blue Rose!
just like Chie's it self!
lol
i love your story!
plz update soon! i want to know more about how chie and aoi meet!

WOW chie? a suspect?!
aoi an ivestigator? detective? undercover agent?
COOL!
sounds interesting!
plz continue writing!
ill wait for your update!
hm who's the Killer?!
OMG!

Update this, please. *puppyeyes* It's really good.

This seems really awesome already. Perhaps some more suspects would've gone down ok, but meh. I'm enjoying it anyway. I hope to see an update soon. You've got to love the good girl/bad girl combo. Always a winner!

Cheers,


Omni.

For once, I actually feel a bit bad for Tomoe. -shrugs-
Interestingg.

lolcat, i can't review one chapter twice.

but seriously, i read it again for kick.

bumpbump

So I'm kinda really hoping you plan on updating, you know, like, today, maybe? Or tomorrow, I can't really be picky. I guess, if you have to, you could update the day AFTER tomorrow, but today would be better. Yup yup. That's what I think.

I've never read In Too Deep, but when I looked it up, and after reading this, I'm really interested! Of course, I had to suppress a laugh at how eager some people are to point out that this isn't an original story, especially when you even said, "Hey, guys, this is based on..."

Anyway. I really can't wait for some more. Not to say you need to update today (really, I'm alright with you posting the day after tomorrow haha --winkwink-- I'm kidding, of course...kinda...), but I'm just so excited! It's been too long since I've read a story that makes me crave more!

The characters that you've assigned to the different roles in the plot is interesting, though I can't say whether or not switching things around would make things any better. Nevertheless, you've managed to make this an original piece, despite the fact that it was based on an actual novel. Good work, and please update as soon as you are able!

substance. something i have found in very little stories.

I like where this is going, please update!!

Plz update soon

Reading this is making me believe I'm watching Law or Order or something like it (basicly a police drama). There really is a shortage of underrated pairings and this adds to the count of how awesome they are. I really like your style, it's both serious and subtly funny... in some obvious cases.

I look forward to the next chapter. Good luck.

lol haruka in a police uniform..is te hot!
lol@runner up...i love when yukino corrects haruka...

hm if chie got rid of tate, sergei and takeda..shouldn't we be thanking her? LMAO

ok best line ever "you can't legally murder someone for being a douchebag" rotf...good thing too...

lol@i design stuffed animals...awesome job! LOL

hm nao wanted to ogle hallard's head of security...i'm guessing that's natsuki...since we haven't seen/heard anything of shiznat yet...it's actually been nice to be shiznat free for the first two chappies LOL

i wish i had a to do list like aoi's! lol somehow i don't feel too bad for her!

i'm really excited to see where this is going
and how aoi is going to seduce chie..lol or vice versa...is hallard as bad as everyone thinks? we'll soon find out!

p.s. yukariko sucks! LOL good choice!
ShotgunNeko

Yay! Not enough Chie/Aoi focused fics out there, and this ones good! Can't wait til they meet, should be fireworks!

Woo!
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Must say I'm quite excited about this story, it's coming along really well. Keep up the good work :]