|Reviews for California Dreaming|
| NameJoe wedderb 3/15/13 . chapter 9
Omg i fell for that story gush i just love is soooo much i want moooooooooooore!
| jarrett17566 3/26/09 . chapter 6
Well I know I said I'd read the Camp Rock one first, but I'm in love with Zac Efron. Eh. Haha. And I wanted to review this before I went to bed. You're one of my favorite authors on this site.
| tecnowiz4309 1/5/09 . chapter 20
omg I love this story I can't wait to read the sequel.
| CodiaseLuvrForevr 12/18/08 . chapter 10
This really was a cliffhanger for me, because my comp died before getting to the next one! :(
now where to begin. firt off I think there's a typo where it says Ryan got in his car and started it.
I don't know if it was planted, seems like zeke is quite the bad boy.
talking back in class, assaulting Ryan in the parking lot, getting arrested, bad mouthn a police officer, etc.
Also kinda weird how you transitioned into the police scene, just saying.
personall i think its a naked troy. that or a bloody one, but im thinkn the 1st.
and i swear i haven't looked ahead yet.
oh, back to him bn a bad boy, isn't interesting he always knows what to say to get him out of trouble, almost preplanned?...
| CodiaseLuvrForevr 12/18/08 . chapter 9
Too lucky if you ask me, and not grateful enough for it.
Since this is my first review for this fic, let me start by saying awsome job, I'm really enjoying it.
I pressume the Zeke character is based on you, name, body etc.
I have to say I'm kinda pro Ryan here. I mean his bf who he loves breaks up with him just for "a chance" at a better piece of meat.
said meat also cheats on his loving bf, who also cheats on him at the same time.
least those 2 had like the whole seperation thing as an excuse though i guess.
still in comparison I can't really see Ry as the villan and them the heroes, maybe that's just me.
| 2legit2quit 7/12/08 . chapter 20
| 2legit2quit 7/11/08 . chapter 18
Soo good! Can't wait for the next chapter! Loves it!
| 2legit2quit 7/11/08 . chapter 17
Amazing! Simply amazing. More detail next time though.
| 2legit2quit 7/8/08 . chapter 15
Really good! Loves it!
| Zbbal 7/1/08 . chapter 13
"I won’t love you anymore if you frost the fruit. No one needs frosting on grapes." -bursts into laughter-
Great chapter! Update soon!
(Yay! Thanks for the Zack and Cody gayness.)
| 2legit2quit 7/1/08 . chapter 13
yeah, i will have to say, this chapter was boring. not much of a romance. more passion next time!
| Zbbal 6/30/08 . chapter 12
Even though this chapter was simply, I still really enjoyed. Please continue to update regularly.
| 2legit2quit 6/30/08 . chapter 12
Really good chapter. You kept it to the point. More romance next chapter though. Loves it!
| Zbbal 6/27/08 . chapter 11
0.o I am...the happiest girl alive! Even if you don't continue with Zack's(Bale) perverted thoughts (I'm assuming they have something to do with the twins -Yay!-), this chapter still fueled some amazing scenarios in my mind. Thanks! Update soon!
| 2legit2quit 6/25/08 . chapter 11
Loved the chapter. Still putting it out there that you might want to make them longer. Just saying. Still love it though!