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| BxBforever 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseNice. |
| MissingCancelledShows 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the most amazing pieces I have ever read. Beautiful. |
| Lerdo 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHoney, this isn't lacking ANY sparkle. No, Booth and Brennan aren't joking and bantering, but that isn't the sum of their relationship. You've captured the ease with which they read each other. There's some beautiful imagery in this with the fire and with Brennan's physical demonstrations of what they tell each other and how. Thanks for sharing this story; I look fwd to reading some more Bones fic from you. |
| Bymaga Jones 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. I thought this was awesome, very well written. It's true that it doesn't contain the normal snappy witticisms of the show, but that wouldn't have felt right here. It does capture those honest, quiet moments that Booth and Brennan have, and it does it well. |
| kitotterkat 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuse:) I thought it was really cute. I'm glad you posted it :) |
| Dr. Temperance Brennan 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. Absolutely lovely. Very raw and real. I loved it. |
| FF.netfanHANNAH 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWell, it was pretty good. keep on typing * hannah * |
| Marte45 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseLaura, have no fear, you have definitely caught them perfectly or at least the way most of us would like to see them. It may be solemn but most of the time, this is how they deal with the pain and suffering brought on by their cases. They always come back to each other in one way or another. Fantastic job! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this! Wonderful! |
| Hidden Fairy 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I think you got into their heads PERFECTLY! I really cant believe how well you portrayed their personas! Brilliant! I really love it! WELL DONE Hidden Fairy |
| Camilla 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was amazing! Truly amazing! |
| Cheryl 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it. I think you did a bang-up job. Thank you for sharing with us. |
| lisaluvsfox22 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! Romantic, but still very in character mode. Good job! |
| Tlara 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my goodness! You did great! I will read this one a few times! |
| CSI-4077 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* That was incredibly sweet and I think you did an admirable job of putting yourself in their heads and keeping them in character. It may have lacked their 'sparkle', but it made up for it in intensity and feeling. Very well written, I enjoyed it immensely! Leah |