 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 16All that i want to say is that I'm glad that I was with you this whole journey, the story is going to have a front seat in my favorites, you're a really talented writter and I'll bet I'll be getting more surprises from your fics.
And in regards to Nightfire: "May the Spirits of the Ancestral Dragons guide your way." |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 15Very very very VERY! AWESOME and well written chapter, need I say more? |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 14That was an oustanding battle chapter, I liked every single detail of it, especially with the sword in his tail. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 13Well it's absolutely amazing!! and that scene with the garbage smashers was from Star Wars, nothing get's past by me so easily |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 12Holy mastodon! that was marvelous, I'm at teh edge of my seat here and that quote "You don’t kill fire breathing dragons without taking a hell of the flames first" gave me a goose bumps. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 11You got real talent there, I bet it was really hard to write this down, poor Nightfire, his metalic heart is broken *sobs* |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 10Whoa!! a super action-packed chapter you've got there, I'm really impressed, it's been very long since I've read stories like this. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 9That was verry phenomenal, more twists and turns makes me want to keep on reading. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 8Amazing, absolutely amazing, I enjoy every single word of it, no spelling errors what's so ever. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-21 . chapter 7Well that was a remarkable change of experience, can't wait to read the next chap, you ROCK! man |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-20 . chapter 6Absolutely amazing, the story is well developed in it's way, you are a natural, keep this up and you'll do just great. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-20 . chapter 5That was so amazing! I don't have the proper words to describe this masterpiece, wonderful, poor Nightfire, we'll he be revived, I certainly hope so. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-20 . chapter 4In my humble opinion, that's the best chapter I've read in months, you truly outdone yourself. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-20 . chapter 3That was awesome, a tremendous job on this chapter, Resident Evil in Tranformers now I've seen everything. |
 DarkRaider08 2008-07-20 . chapter 2oh boy the story is geting better and better and in gave me the chills, Cheetor is a real scaredy-cat. |