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| Raxivace 2008-09-21 ch 8,  | abuseThat was a great chapter. But... Joumae... I'm kind of expecting Even to have a Lockshield, to be honest. |
| Raxivace 2008-09-21 ch 7, | abuseAnother great chapter. |
| heloplayer 2008-09-18 ch 1, | abusegreat story. |
| ShockBurst 2008-08-09 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter. You're getting close to the canon storyline. Hope you update soon. |
| ShockBurst 2008-07-26 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter, dude. Can't believe Alex is going to play for the Baron's side for two years. Hope you update soon. |
| Raxivace 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseNice plot twist. I really still need to play this series... |
| Inuhoono 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseVery good, I have to say that I didn't really see this coming. But it's not like you could do much with Alex in prision...KEEP IT UP! |
| Inuhoono 2008-06-30 ch 4, | abuseVery interesting, can't wait to see what will be in the next chapter...KEEP IT UP! |
| Raxivace 2008-06-24 ch 4, | abuseInteresting twist. And you're completely right. Those "protection missions" are annoying. They are interesting in theory, but... ugh... |
| ShockBurst 2008-06-24 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. You managed to give Alex something to do and I liked the explanation of installing the turrets in the sewers. Hope you update soon. |
| Sahxyel 2008-06-24 ch 4, | abuseMUHAHAHA! Hi-hi Newbie-Spud! I'm back! :D And I must say that this story is much easier for me to get into...possibly because I have limited knowledge of the Jak universe, but... *shrugs* This, so far, has been highly entertaining and dynamic! What will Alex do, with TWO YEARS needed to even start the actual gameplay?! o.o I must see! |
| ShockBurst 2008-06-05 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter. Loved the few OCs you made and you also included Jinx. Hope you update soon. |
| Raxivace 2008-06-04 ch 3, | abuseThis was pretty dark, but great none the less. |
| Dragonborn 2008-06-04 ch 3, | abuseHah, the J&D Chars got their first taste of magic and they couldn't handle it. Love the update, Alex. |
| LunarWolfCry 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseJak II, eh? Wasn't expecting that. Anyways, I like how your writing has improved. You've fleshed out the characters some more. And by that, I mean finally introducing us to Alex's parents. Even though I'm not interested in Kingdom Hearts anymore, I applaud your increasing writing ability. And by the way, this is Haku with a name change. ;) |