Reading that made me happy :) I loved Gray's little comments at the beginning and end of every chapter; they gave him this wonderful sort of wistfulness and wisdom. Actually, the whole thing is just plain amazing. Keep writing!

Wah!
That was wonderful!
Hope you get a few more successful stories!^-^

God I'm such a sucker for happy endings... XD

-sniffs and starts to cry- I love this story! :'D

yay they got back together after a while! and had more babies! that reminds me of my older brother and me.. he watches out for me and stuff too but he gives me advice and points out my wrongs and such.. but he can also be an ass. i think honestly though that i wouldnt be the person i am today though without him. gracen is lucky to have cameron :) i know im glad to have my older brother

It took me a few hours, but I sat down and read this whole thing in one read! That's actually pretty rare, considering my short attention span.

I LOVED IT! I nearly cried when I thought Claire died (since Gray was talking in his journal about having lost her)and was so super happy when they got back together and they had a baby!

LOVE the line at the end "No matter how many times my daddy had to try" LOL!

<3 it!

Aww, it's so cute!

I love it! I really do!


Kudos to your writing! ^_^

Aww! So it DID end up as a happy ending! I'm glad. I seriously thought it was going to be one of those bittersweet and sad endings.

Claire got back her sight. I was sort of confused as to why she was treating Gray so weirdly until I realized that she doesn't know how he looks like. *slaps forehead* I seriously cannot believe I forgot about that.

Poor Kai. He really loved Claire a lot. He did so much for her but I guess he couldn't fill in Gray's spot. Well, he seems happy with Popuri right now so I'm happy too =)
Sort of surprised to hear him mentioning the past so casually. I thought maybe Popuri would be jealous or something. Guess in the 2 years, everything settled down.

Hehe, Cameron wants a brother, like other little boys xD How cute. He's so awesome too! How he glares at people and told Gray that it was rude to stare at people xD

I thought the last chapter was going to be Fall related, considering it was 'White Snow', 'Dawning Spring', and 'Summer's End' for the last few chapters. What happened to the colour theme anyways?

I'm glad for this ending, seriously. I was sort of expecting for Claire to fall for Kai, or for Kai to tempt her to the city with the promise of getting her sight back and then never letting her go back to Mineral Town again, or that she didn't survive the operation. As much as I love reading sad stories, I love happy endings =)

Love, love, LOVE the story! IT was amazing. Sorry for the late reply. My laptop decided to be stubborn and refuse to connect to the internet. In fact, I'm at the school's library borrowing the computer. It's the only way to read fanfiction and view my lecture notes ><;; Oh well, I hope I get my laptop fixed.
But yeah, great work! Keep it up! Can't wait to see what your next story idea is. I gotta go, friend is bugging me about leaving since it's late and she has a 8:30 class tomorrow xD See ya!

AW! loved the ending!! Loved the whole thing! Was Great!

Lol, loved this chapter. I'm glad they finally got their happy ending, because I felt so terrible for Gray. My favorite was when Cameron said "He's not all that scary" and so on. That was amazing, I loved it. Heck, I liked Cameron a lot, and you portrayed him perfectly. There were a few spelling/grammer things, but it wasn't anything huge.

Now I have to go read the other one... :D Great job. Congrats on finishing your first fic!

Aw :) Very, very nice conclusion to a very, very nice story. Well done. There was a great sense of finishing to it.

i loved this chapter! i felt so bad for Gray, not knowing for so long. And for Kai, who just loves Claire to death. At least he is happy with Popuri. i was rofl when Cameron said ty harder to get me a brother! XD
congrats on finishing your first long fic!

Cute.
:D

Cameron makes me smile. :)

Kinda sad it over. D;
But, good last chapter. :D
Even if I was a little confused on what was going on. xD;

This is ending is just filled with all sorts of adorable. ^_^

Claire's reaction to actually seeing Gray for the first time was probably the most wonderful part, and I think you really captured that moment beautifully.

Congrats on finishing this, and here's to the stories to follow!

No! NO! Oh my god...I'm so attached to this story. It's like I'm really there, and ...Agh, no! Claire, come back!

I love this story so much. I can honestly say, that this is probably one of the best Harvest Moon fanfics I've ever read.