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| tommys21 2008-05-20 ch 4, | abuseI love this story.Please update soon |
| Maddiecake 2008-05-20 ch 4, | abuseHaha Billy Shears... that makes me turn several shades of happy. :D So I think your characterization is spot on, hope to see another update from you soon! ~ Madeleine |
| angel718 2008-04-30 ch 3, | abuseAw, I love it! Julia's wonderful, and this fic is so much fun... |
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-04-27 ch 3, | abuseOh, this is great. I love it so far. "Did you...just basically tell Mom to ** off?" Max asked. "For lack of a better word...yes, I did." Sadie smirked at me. "Nice." You have no idea how many times in my life I have wanted to do that, so...I don't know, that whole section was great. Prudence stumbling in going "What did I miss?" was priceless. Billy and Julia are going to be an adorable couple. They just are, I know it =D |
| Mo 2008-04-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG! i love billy! hehehehe maxies adorable. wow! yay for julia! *applause* serioiously! you NEED to update this! AND SOON! i'm gonna burst! i can't go another day! lol sorry. i just LOVE this! update puhleez?? |
| SiriusLovesRent 2008-04-25 ch 3, | abuse:O GO JULIA! Wow! She stood up to her mom! I might just be as proud as Max is. Go her for defending everybody! Hahaha...Prudence, once again, has succeeded at making me laugh. Meheheh...so Sir ** isn't so much of an ** after all XD I think I might like Billy. And I usually HATE OC's with all my heart. Wonderful, as usual! Pleasee update SOON! I really love this! So update. Like now. Because I'm in desperate need of a good fic to read. P.S: Writers block's a ** aint it? I know what you're talking about. But I really hope you update You've Got to Hide Your Love Away soon! Because I just can't stand it! And I want you to continue the saga of Max and Jude too! =D |
| Maureen 2008-04-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseOoh! I love this so far! I'm not really a fan of what people do with Julia's character, but theres something about the way you write her. Uhm..what else? You're an incredible writer! Heehee. Oh Prudence. Getting Julia high and whatnot. Omg, are Max and Jude gonna get together? -is happy- They so should. Anywayz This is pretty ** amazing and I REALLY hope you update soon! Like right now! Because I'm dying to see what happens! |
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseI liked it. I liked it A LOT. You do a great job of making Julia a wide-eyed, naive teenager being swept up by the "big, bad city." I also love how she's not exactly like Lucy and she's not exactly like Max, but she's an odd mix of the two. I really like this so far, keep it up! |
| SiriusLovesRent 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseOoh wonderful wonderful! I really loved this one. Hmm, happiness? Do I smell Max/Jude in the future? Haha, I'll still love this even if they aren't together :D Friends or in love, Max and Jude are adorable . Hahahaha, Prudence got Julia high XD Nicee.. Ooh, Billy? Hmm. I definietly wanna see more of him. GREAT chapter ! Update son! :] I LOVE this. |
| spectacularspectacular 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abusethis tory excites me! :D |
| jn208505 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting take! I realy like it. Keep up the good work :) ~J |
| Sheena Is A Punk Rocker 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abusei LOVE it! ^_^ |
| SiriusLovesRent 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOoh, great idea! Max picking her up was so cute :D Are Max and Jude gonna get together/be together in this fic? It'd be interesting to see what Julia made of that. Fics about Julia intrigue me. It's interesting to see how people explore her character in a more in depth way. This is going to be amazing! But isn't everything you write? Update soon! I wanna see where this goes :] Wonderful start ! |
| dudeurfugly 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI like this. I love the brother/sister bond between Max and Julia, and that they both have the same twisted sense of humor. :) It's a good start, and I can't wait to see where it leads... Update soon! |