aww... It's so sweet, I could puke. _

But seriously though, this is very well written. Please update soon!

it's hard for me to imagine Lockdown calling anyone "cutie", but that's a fun apiring... Prowl and lockdown... I should look into that. This story is really great, and I enjoy your take on fight scenes.

The pet names and shit are increasingly obnoxious and out of character, but this still is a very interesting story

but why would Sentinel cause problems? (That is, aside from the ones he usually creates by just being an ass)

aww how cute this was. this was good ) keep it up

This chapter was nicely done. I think your pace for this couple is working well. While jumping straight into the berth has it's place, I think you are being much more practical/realistic(?) about the whole relationship thing being taken in little smaller steps.

That's pretty much how it goes, yup. Pretty spontaneous. I thought it was really sweet, and it's realistic how they're still taking it in stages, not going straight to jumping into a berth together as soon as they fall in love. Y'know, but there's a place for that too of course. :P

Aw this story is so sweet and angsty at the same time. Very well writen, good job! Are you going to update soon? I can't to see what happens next!

Lady Grace

Yeah so Prowl's OOC but I still like where you're going with this story. Everything doesn't have to be all canon all the time ya know (referring to some other reviews) :P

Anyway, good job, looking forward to your next update :)

This is a gripping story - I love the Jazz/Prowl pairing. My only issue with it is how you've portrayed Lockdown - it just seems rather contradictory and hypocritical of him to rant about his family on Cybertron on one hand while lusting after Prowl on the other hand. But that's not stopping me from enjoying the show - I'm alerting this. Great work!

And that's why you never piss off anyone who even has remotely ad much strength as you!

I loved Jazz in this chapter!

Please write more soon! This is really getting good!

wow! nothing wrong with this and it was very great! can't wait for 11. I never thought I see the day, jazz would become all angry, like Sunstreaker o.o

I really do enjoy this fanfic, I'm always checking if there's been an update and enjoy every one of them

You're gonna give Prowl, and me, a massive heart attack. I almost cried out in dismay when I read this. Please update soon, I can't take the suspense!