Thanks so much for this! (_ _) you really brought all my thoughts into perspective and justified the doujin.
I love how you've written it, very melancholic and filled with loneliness.
Its just as it should be - brooding but very subtle - its very much like Sasuke. And the latter portion really does provide a deeper look into what might be troubling Sakura.

Haha, like i said, not quite so fast with the updates to the doujin, i might have had no inspiration,
but thanks to this, i think i have a reason to keep continuing with it. ^_^

Again thanks for this! It means a lot to me that you've taken the time to write something. Much love!

-potu

That was a very good description of how Sasuke and Sakura think the other one feels about them. The writing was very good as well. Great job!

i really enjoyed it, especially Sakura's part. I just felt a weird connection to it. Nice job, and it was definatley something worth remembering!