PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!! THANK YOU

umm u do realize that u posted chappy 2 twice right? 0.0 I wanted to meet Hikari too oh well I can't wait until u update ^_^ and u should feel special because this is my first ever time reading a "Her majesty's dog" lol and u left me wit a cliffy and hope -_- COME BACK AND WRITE AGAIN!

Minor comma mistakes. But, other than that, it was great.

I like this story, I hope you update soon.

You need to stop using so many comma marks. But it was ok.