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Reviews For: Cold Feet

ridiculous 123 2008-04-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is the best fic I have read on this site. This was so natural and believable. It was so realistic. Thank you for that. I have been waiting for a story that shows Bella fearing becoming a vampire. Because seriously if she wasn't nervous at all, well, then she's not human! I loved the talk with Rosalie. Rose is my favorite vamp in the series and so she sounded so human and personable and alive in this story. You really gave everyone character. This is awesome! I love their talk and how Bella's decision is open ended. As im, us the readers are allowed to end it how we want. I love how you gave Bella fears of everything she is doing as "last" things- last brush of her teeth, last sandwich, etc. It gave meaning to the story. And I love that Bella's a bookworm too!! Keep up the great work!! xoxo
whoa dream big 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseThis is my favorite Twilight fic. Ever. It's always been a problem for me how easily Bella is willing to sign her mortality away. I think in Eclipse we begin to see Bella doubting her decision, at least a little bit, but you're right ... there definitely needs to be a scene like this fic in the next book. Otherwise it is just so unrealistic (not like the entire book is realistic considering the vampire and werewolf stuff but you get my point). I also really like Rosalie and I think that most of the fics around here - and the books themselves - don't really do Rosalie justice. There's a lot more to her than a shallow, vapid, bitchy vampire. Thanks so much for posting this. The writing is amazing, the characterization is perfect... and honestly? I loved Rosalie's power. I think it's incredibly original. I hope you post more of something else soon. Or even another part to this (Edward finding out about Bella's decision to wait a year or two would be awesome to read!). I love this! :)
Duck the Duck 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was excellent. It's always a treat to find a gem like this on ! I loved the interaction between Bella and Rosalie, and the way you wrote it was very in character. I also think that in Breaking Dawn Bella will have this moment of realisation...but unlike your fic, I think she'll go ahead with becoming a vampire anyway. Loved the fic!
Shannon 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was absolutely wonderful. I loved how intuitive and personable you made Rosalie. The idea was great.
SpiritualEnergy 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseAmazing! You actually made me sympathize and LIKE Bella here. You really fleshed out all that fear and indecision she was feeling about becoming a vampire. This would honestly be something I wish would happen in the books. And your Rosalie is perfect in my mind. She's got more personality here than we normally see (and I liked the power thing. I always thought it was weird that all she had was her looks when she became a vampire), and the drive and their talk was like a swift kick in the head for Bella, which is just what she needed. So even if she didn't make a complete decision to stay human or to become a vampire, it showed a lot of growth - that she was willing to wait - that I hope we actually get in the books. Anyways... keep being awesome. Because I like it. ;D
Valentina 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseCongratulations for an exellent story! you have so much talent... You were able to capture the esence of the characters but some way get them to be real and true to humanity fears. An exellent job.. please write more
Saranha de Angelo 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh...a Bella who actually starts thinking about how her decisions will ripple out, recognizes that there actually is more to life than Edward, and a Rosalie who is really intelligent and reasonable. Thank you so much! This is fabulous and so refreshing...I think you did a really nice job of making the characters do/say things they normally wouldn't, while still making it compatible with the way they think and act in the books. Thanks!
ABsy 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow I really liked this. I totally agree, thats one of my biggest problems with Twilight too...personally I dont want her to be changed.
starapplek 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon.	abusei loved it. amazing. simply beautiful. i am pro edward & bella, mostly because i do not think bella deserves jacob. ok; sorry. had to get that off my chest. :] this was beautifully written. loved it. i hope breaking dawn is like this ^^
Kyori Uchiha of the Sand 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abusejust to let you know, it is spelled Renee, not rene
DQRC 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is truly excellent. You pretty much summed up all the things that annoy me about Bella's decision to become a vampire and wove them into one brilliantly written story. I love the interaction between Bella and Rosalie; it seems so natural and very fitting to canon. Thankyou so much for writing this, it was very enjoyable to read. I wish Bella WOULD wait until she was older!
Evil Queen of the Demon Pan... 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseWow. 0_0 After I had given up all hope of ever finding anything decent on , here I stumble on this little Twilight-y gem stuck away in a corner. ^_^ Beautiful, really. Well-written, plus it addressed all the issues I think Bella should have with becoming a vampire. Good job of keeping everyone in character, too.

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