nice :)

That sounds exactly right

Oh I love it! It's like the perfect summary of the Star Wars saga without using any names, lol. Nice job!

cool prophecy. nicely written.

Tis cool to see a rendition of the prophecy--I think the prequels may have made more sense if its words had actually been revealed. I like the reptition of "master" and "apprentice", which is as confusing as a vague prophecy should be, and also sounds poetic.